列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and 'um' to make your answer sound more natural and confident. Also, correct small grammar mistakes such as 'reframe' which should be 'refrain' and 'is' which should be 'are'. Keep your sentences clear and concise, and try to use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

示例: Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping because it helps me remember what to buy and prevents me from purchasing unnecessary items.

建议: Avoid repeating phrases and filler words to improve fluency. Also, try to use more precise vocabulary; for example, instead of 'cost deeply', say 'cause serious problems'. Use linking words like 'because' to explain your points clearly and keep your sentences structured.

示例: Yes, I make lists for my work because there are many tasks to complete. If I don't write them down, I might forget some, which could cause serious problems.

建议: Try to organise your ideas more clearly and avoid hesitation sounds. Use linking words like 'because' and 'so' to connect your ideas logically. Also, correct grammar mistakes such as 'works' which should be 'work' and simplify your sentences for clarity.

示例: Some people dislike making lists because they feel it forces them to follow a rigid schedule. They prefer to work freely, believing this helps them perform better.

建议: Reduce repetition and filler words to improve fluency. Use correct grammar such as 'phones are' instead of 'phones is'. Also, try to use linking words like 'because' and 'so' to make your answer more coherent and natural.

示例: I prefer making lists on my phone because I always have it with me, so I can check my list anytime. Also, the notification feature helps remind me of important tasks, which makes it better than paper lists.

× A list can prevent me from forgetting what to buy, and it can somehow help me to, uh, reframe myself from buying too many things that is actually not necessary.

✓ A list can prevent me from forgetting what to buy, and it can somehow help me to, uh, refrain myself from buying too many things that are actually not necessary.

The phrase 'too many things that is actually not necessary' contains a singular verb 'is' with the plural noun 'things'. The verb should agree in number with the noun, so 'is' should be changed to 'are'. Also, 'reframe' is incorrect here; the correct verb is 'refrain', meaning to hold back from doing something.

× Well, some people don't like making a list because they don't like the feeling that a kind of, they have to stick to a rigid, uh, schedule is to, uh, complete all their works or their jobs and maybe that, uh, do things freely so they can, then they can do things better.

✓ Well, some people don't like making a list because they don't like the feeling that they have to stick to a rigid, uh, schedule to, uh, complete all their work or their jobs and maybe that, uh, do things freely so they can, then they can do things better.

The phrase 'all their works' is incorrect because 'work' is an uncountable noun and does not take a plural form in this context. Therefore, 'works' should be corrected to 'work'. Also, the sentence structure is a bit awkward but the main plural issue is with 'works'.

× So I think that phones is better than paper.

✓ So I think that phones are better than paper.

The subject 'phones' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is' to agree in number. This is a subject-verb agreement issue related to singular and plural forms.