列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Try to reduce the use of filler words like 'uh' and 'sometime' and avoid repeating words such as 'if'. Also, make your answer more concise and clear by structuring it with a clear topic sentence and supporting details.

示例: Yes, I usually make a list when I go shopping, especially for groceries. This helps me remember important items and avoid making extra trips later.

建议: Improve sentence clarity and grammar by simplifying phrases and using linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Avoid awkward expressions like 'due to according to the preference' and use more natural phrases.

示例: Yes, at the start of the day, I make a to-do list and prioritize tasks according to their importance. Then, I work on completing them and review my progress in the evening.

建议: Avoid filler words and improve sentence structure for clarity. Use linking words like 'however' to contrast ideas and provide more specific reasons or examples.

示例: It depends on the person. Some people are very organized and make lists to avoid forgetting important things. However, others prefer to handle tasks spontaneously without much planning.

建议: Try to make your answer more concise and avoid repeating similar ideas. Use linking words like 'because' and 'so' effectively to connect your reasons clearly.

示例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's convenient and always with me, even during business trips. Also, using phone notes makes it easy to organize and access my lists digitally.

× I make a list when I go for the shop

✓ I make a list when I go shopping

The phrase 'go for the shop' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'go shopping' to indicate the activity of buying goods. Using 'go for the shop' is not standard English usage.

× sometime I tend to miss, uh, buying the important things

✓ sometimes I tend to miss buying important things

The word 'sometime' should be 'sometimes' to indicate frequency. Also, 'the important things' is better as 'important things' without 'the' to generalize the items missed.

× I have to go to Ajay again for the shopping

✓ I have to go to Ajay again for shopping

The phrase 'for the shopping' is incorrect; 'for shopping' is the correct form when referring to the activity in general.

× I make A to do list for the day

✓ I make a to-do list for the day

The article 'A' should be lowercase 'a' and 'to do list' should be hyphenated as 'to-do list' to correctly form the noun phrase.

× prioritize it due to according to the preference

✓ prioritize it according to preference

The phrase 'due to according to' is redundant and incorrect. The correct preposition is 'according to' when indicating basis or criteria.

× to see whatever the task I assigned today has been completed or not

✓ to see whether the tasks I assigned today have been completed or not

The word 'whatever' should be 'whether' to indicate a yes/no condition. Also, 'task' should be plural 'tasks' to agree with 'have been completed'.

× It depends on person to person

✓ It depends on person to person

This sentence is acceptable in informal speech; however, a more standard form is 'It depends from person to person' or 'It depends on the person'. Since 'depends on person to person' is idiomatic, no correction is necessary.

× Few people are more organized and they uh, make list for everything

✓ A few people are more organized and they make lists for everything

'Few' without 'a' implies almost none, so 'A few' is correct to indicate some people. Also, 'make list' should be 'make lists' to agree in number.

× doing things as it comes to them

✓ doing things as they come to them

The phrase 'as it comes to them' is incorrect because 'things' is plural, so the pronoun should be 'they' and verb 'come' plural.

× I make list on my phone

✓ I make lists on my phone

'Make list' should be plural 'make lists' to indicate the general activity of making multiple lists.

× it's always available, handy with me even when I go for a business tour or business work

✓ it's always available and handy with me even when I go on a business tour or for business work

The phrase 'go for a business tour' should be 'go on a business tour'. Also, 'business work' should be preceded by 'for' to indicate purpose.