列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Try to avoid filler words like 'Uh' and improve grammar by using correct verb forms and articles. Also, make your sentences more concise and natural by saying, for example, 'I sometimes make a shopping list because it helps me remember what to buy and avoid forgetting anything.'

示例: I sometimes make a shopping list because it helps me remember what to buy and avoid forgetting anything.

建议: Focus on clarity and grammar. Avoid mixing pronouns and ensure sentences are complete. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly, for example, 'I sometimes make a list of daily tasks because it helps me manage my time and focus better on my work.'

示例: I sometimes make a list of daily tasks because it helps me manage my time and focus better on my work.

建议: Improve subject-verb agreement and use more precise vocabulary. Also, clarify your ideas with linking words. For example, 'Some people don't like making lists because they don't want to feel restricted by routines; instead, they prefer to do things freely without following strict plans.'

示例: Some people don't like making lists because they don't want to feel restricted by routines; instead, they prefer to do things freely without following strict plans.

建议: Complete your sentences and avoid redundancy. Use clear comparisons and linking words. For example, 'I prefer making lists on my phone because it's easy to edit them, whereas paper lists are harder to change.'

示例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's easy to edit them, whereas paper lists are harder to change.

× It helps me keeping in track what is necessary things to buy and it helps me not to forget any options.

✓ It helps me keep track of what necessary things to buy and it helps me not to forget any options.

The verb 'helps' should be followed by the base form of the verb 'keep' instead of the gerund 'keeping'. Also, the phrase 'keeping in track' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'keep track of'.

× It helps me keeping in track what is necessary things to buy and it helps me not to forget any options.

✓ It helps me keep track of what necessary things to buy and it helps me not to forget any options.

The phrase 'necessary things' is correct, but 'what is necessary things' is incorrect because 'things' is plural and should be paired with 'are' instead of 'is'. However, rephrasing to 'what necessary things to buy' avoids this issue.

× So I usually make list.

✓ So I usually make a list.

The noun 'list' is countable and singular here, so it requires the indefinite article 'a'. Omitting the article causes a grammatical error.

× It helps me to keep balance in time and we can I can focus on the work properly.

✓ It helps me to keep balance in time and I can focus on the work properly.

The phrase 'we can I can' is incorrect and confusing. The correct pronoun here is 'I' to match the subject, and 'we can' should be removed.

× Some people doesn't want to bound themselves into a routine, that's why they don't want to make list.

✓ Some people don't want to bound themselves into a routine, that's why they don't want to make a list.

'People' is plural, so the verb should be 'don't' instead of 'doesn't'. Also, 'make list' requires the article 'a' before 'list'.

× Some people doesn't want to bound themselves into a routine, that's why they don't want to make list.

✓ Some people don't want to be bound by a routine, that's why they don't want to make a list.

The verb 'want' should be followed by the base form or infinitive. 'Bound' is a past participle and needs 'to be' before it. Also, 'bound themselves into' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'by'.

× But it also helps them by doing everything freely.

✓ But it also helps them do everything freely.

The phrase 'helps them by doing' is incorrect; 'helps them do' is the correct structure where 'help' is followed by the object and base verb.

× I do both, but I usually prefer making a list on phone because we can edit the list after making it, but while writing it on a paper we can barely try to edit that and for example it can be very easy to.

✓ I do both, but I usually prefer making a list on my phone because we can edit the list after making it, but while writing it on paper, we can barely try to edit it, and for example, it can be very difficult.

'On phone' should be 'on my phone' to specify possession. 'On a paper' is incorrect; 'on paper' is the correct phrase. 'Try to edit that' is awkward; 'edit it' is better. The sentence ending 'it can be very easy to' is incomplete and unclear; 'very difficult' fits the intended meaning better.