列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答は直接的ですが、文法の誤りと不自然な表現があります。例えば、「list items what I need」は「list the items I need」に修正すべきです。また、理由をもう少し具体的に述べると良いでしょう。

示例: No, I usually don't make a list when I shop because I have a good memory and can remember what I need easily.

建议: 文法の誤りが目立ちます（例："A to do list" → "a to-do list"、"in a one day" → "in one day"、"forgot" → "forget"）。また、接続詞の使い方は良いですが、より自然な表現に改善できます。

示例: Yes, I sometimes make a to-do list for my job because I have many tasks to complete in one day. Without the list, I often forget some of them.

建议: 意味が不明瞭で文法も誤っています（"don't like to making rich speakers"は意味不明）。理由を明確にし、正しい文法で表現しましょう。

示例: In my opinion, some people don't like making lists because it can be stressful. They feel pressured to complete everything on the list, which can be annoying.

建议: 文法と語彙の誤りがあります（"on by my phone"は不自然、"easier to rely"は意味不明）。より自然で正確な表現を使いましょう。

示例: I prefer to make a list on my phone because it's easier to edit and update compared to paper lists.

× No, actually I have a good memory so I don't need to list items what I need.

✓ No, actually I have a good memory so I don't need to list the items that I need.

The pronoun 'what' is incorrectly used here; it should be 'that' to correctly refer to the items needed. Using 'that' properly connects the clause to the noun 'items'.

× Yes, I sometimes make A to do list for my job because there are a lot of things to do in a one day.

✓ Yes, I sometimes make a to-do list for my job because there are a lot of things to do in one day.

The article 'A' should be lowercase 'a' and 'to do list' should be hyphenated as 'to-do list'. Also, 'a one day' is incorrect; 'one day' does not need an article. Articles must be used correctly to maintain natural English expression.

× Therefore I usually forgot to do those kind of things without the list.

✓ Therefore I usually forget to do those kinds of things without the list.

The verb 'forgot' is past tense, but the adverb 'usually' indicates a habitual action, so the present tense 'forget' should be used. Also, 'kind' should be plural 'kinds' to agree with 'those'.

× In my opinion, most people don't like to making rich speakers.

✓ In my opinion, most people don't like making rich speakers.

After 'don't like', the verb should be in the gerund form without 'to'. The phrase 'to making' is incorrect; it should be 'making'.

× It sometimes annoys a lot because we tend to think we have to do with the list, which leads to some stress.

✓ It sometimes annoys a lot because we tend to think we have to do things on the list, which leads to some stress.

The preposition 'with' is incorrectly used here. The correct preposition is 'on' when referring to items on a list. Also, 'do with the list' is unclear; 'do things on the list' is clearer.

× I prefer to make a list on by my phone because if we make a list on a paper, it is very tough work to fix it.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because if we make a list on paper, it is very tough work to fix it.

The preposition 'on by' is incorrect; it should be just 'on'. Also, 'on a paper' should be 'on paper' as 'paper' is uncountable here.

× If we make a list on my iPhone, it can be easier to rely.

✓ If we make a list on my iPhone, it can be easier to rely on.

The verb 'rely' requires the preposition 'on' to complete its meaning. Without 'on', the sentence is incomplete and grammatically incorrect.