列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is generally clear but contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing, such as '1st' and 'something that match I might need.' Try to use full words and correct verb forms. Also, avoid redundancy by not repeating similar ideas. Use linking words to improve coherence.

示例: No, I usually don't make a list when I go shopping because I prefer to browse the stores first to see if there is anything that matches my needs. If I find something suitable, I decide to buy it immediately.

建议: There are some unclear words like 'make legs' and 'prioritize them based on their lives' which affect clarity. Please use correct vocabulary and expressions. Also, try to link your ideas more smoothly and avoid vague terms.

示例: Yes, I usually make lists for my assignments and prioritize them based on their deadlines. I also set a schedule for each task, which helps me stay organized and manage my time effectively. This method has been very helpful.

建议: Your answer has some repetition ('additionally, additionally') and unclear phrasing ('challenging me'). Try to avoid repeating words and use clearer expressions. Use linking words appropriately to connect ideas.

示例: Some people don't like making lists because they find it challenging and prefer to act spontaneously. Moreover, they might feel that too much planning restricts their creativity and freedom.

建议: Your answer has unclear phrases like 'make this on my phone' and 'set reminder tasks for installing.' Please use precise vocabulary and complete sentences. Also, try to link your ideas logically and avoid minor errors.

示例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I always carry it with me, which makes it convenient to add or check items anytime. I can also set reminders for tasks, so I don't forget anything.

× No, I really don't make a list when I go shopping because I prefer to browse the stores 1st and see whether there is something that match I might need.

✓ No, I really don't make a list when I go shopping because I prefer to browse the stores first and see whether there is something that matches I might need.

The verb 'match' should be in the third person singular form 'matches' to agree with the singular subject 'something'. Also, '1st' should be written as 'first' for formal correctness.

× Yes, I usually make legs for my assignments and prioritize them based on their lives.

✓ Yes, I usually make lists for my assignments and prioritize them based on their lives.

The word 'legs' is incorrect here; the correct plural noun is 'lists'. This is a singular/plural vocabulary error.

× Yes, I usually make legs for my assignments and prioritize them based on their lives.

✓ Yes, I usually make lists for my assignments and prioritize them based on their lives.

The word 'lives' seems incorrect in context; possibly 'deadlines' or 'priorities' was intended. However, since the instruction is to only correct grammar problems from the list, this is left as is.

× Some people don't like making lists because they find it challenging me and prefer to act spontaneously.

✓ Some people don't like making lists because they find it challenging and prefer to act spontaneously.

The pronoun 'me' is incorrectly used here; it should be removed to make the sentence grammatically correct.

× Additionally, additionally, they might feel that planning too much restricts their creativity and freedom.

✓ Additionally, they might feel that planning too much restricts their creativity and freedom.

The word 'additionally' is repeated unnecessarily; removing the duplicate improves sentence clarity.

× I prefer to make this on my phone because I always carry it with me, which makes it really convenient to add or check items more.

✓ I prefer to make this on my phone because I always carry it with me, which makes it really convenient to add or check items more easily.

The adverb 'more' is incorrectly used here; 'more easily' is the correct form to modify the verb phrase.

× I can set reminder tasks for installing.

✓ I can set reminder tasks for installation.

The noun 'installing' is incorrectly used; 'installation' is the correct noun form to use after 'for'.