列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议简化句子结构，使用正确的时态和单复数形式，并且避免重复表达。

示例: Yes, I always make a shopping list to clearly know which items I need to buy and in what order.

建议: 回答中时态使用不当，且句子结构不够自然。建议使用现在时态描述习惯行为，并且用连接词使句子更连贯。

示例: Yes, I usually make a list before learning new concepts because it helps me know what to read and review afterwards.

建议: 回答内容较为重复且表达不够简洁，建议使用更自然的表达方式，并且避免多余的词汇。

示例: Some people might dislike making lists because they feel it's unnecessary and time-consuming, and they don't believe it helps organize their thoughts.

建议: 回答中存在语法错误和重复词汇，建议简化句子结构，使用正确的词汇，并且注意连贯性。

示例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's more convenient, and since I carry my phone every day, I can easily check my list anytime.

× Yes, of course I will make less in order to know the order that I need to buy what items and it make me clearly what I need.

✓ Yes, of course I will make a list in order to know the order of the items that I need to buy and it makes clear to me what I need.

这里“less”应为“list”，是单复数错误；“make”应为“makes”，主语是单数it，动词需加s。建议注意单复数形式和主谓一致。

× Yes, when I was studying I usually make a list before I learning the new concepts.

✓ Yes, when I was studying I usually made a list before I learned the new concepts.

描述过去习惯动作时，动词应使用过去时态。这里“make”应为“made”，“learning”应为“learned”。建议复习过去时态的正确用法。

× Yes, when I was studying I usually make a list before I learning the new concepts.

✓ Yes, when I was studying I usually made a list before I learned the new concepts.

“before”后面接动词时应使用过去式而非动名词。这里“learning”应改为“learned”。建议注意动词形式的搭配。

× I think I'm more likely to use phone to make less.

✓ I think I'm more likely to use my phone to make lists.

“phone”前缺少冠词“my”，且“less”应为“lists”，单复数错误。建议注意冠词和名词的单复数形式。

× I think it's much convenient than using a paper and I I need to take over my phone every day so I can check the list whenever I want to remember something.

✓ I think it's much more convenient than using paper and I need to carry my phone every day so I can check the list whenever I want to remember something.

“much convenient”应为“much more convenient”，比较级需要“more”；“using a paper”应为“using paper”，不可数名词不加冠词；“take over my phone”应为“carry my phone”，搭配错误。建议学习比较级用法和固定搭配。