列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Try to make your answer more coherent and concise by avoiding filler words like 'uh' and redundant phrases. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and provide specific reasons or examples to support your points.

示例: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me remember essential items and reduces stress. For example, when I have a list, I can quickly find what I need without wandering around the store.

建议: Focus on clarity and grammatical accuracy. Avoid filler words and repetition. Use linking words to organize your answer logically and provide specific examples of how the list helps you manage your work.

示例: Yes, I make a daily work list every morning that includes my schedules and appointments. This method helps me stay organized and complete my tasks on time.

建议: Improve sentence structure and clarity by avoiding filler words and incomplete thoughts. Provide clearer reasons and use linking words to connect ideas logically.

示例: Some people dislike making lists because they find it stressful. For instance, if they don't complete all tasks on the list, they may feel anxious or overwhelmed.

建议: Make your answer more fluent by reducing filler words and improving sentence structure. Use linking words to explain your preference clearly and provide specific reasons.

示例: I used to make lists on paper, but nowadays I prefer using my phone because I often forget paper lists at home. Using my phone is more convenient, especially when I'm busy taking care of my kids.

× Yes, I make a list of for my daily work.

✓ Yes, I make a list for my daily work.

The preposition 'of' is unnecessary and incorrect in this context. The correct phrase is 'make a list for my daily work' to indicate the purpose of the list.

× Yeah, it's working never whenever like, uh, started morning.

✓ Yeah, it works every morning when I start.

The original sentence has incorrect pronoun and verb usage. 'It's working never whenever like' is ungrammatical. The correct expression is 'it works every morning when I start' to convey habitual action.

× So it's helpful me, uh, finish my work on a time and also, uh helpful in, uh, finish work on a time.

✓ So it helps me finish my work on time and is also helpful in finishing work on time.

The phrase 'helpful me' is incorrect; it should be 'helps me'. Also, 'on a time' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'on time'. Additionally, 'helpful in finish work' should be 'helpful in finishing work' to use the gerund form after a preposition.

× Uh, they are very like, uh. They feel it's a lazy work or whenever uh works not finished they are feel stressed or feel anxiety after that.

✓ They feel it's lazy work, and when the work is not finished, they feel stressed or anxious afterwards.

The original sentence has incorrect pronoun and verb forms such as 'they are very like' and 'they are feel stressed'. The corrected sentence uses proper verb forms and pronouns for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Before I usually make a list on a paper, but uh, now these days I prefer, uh, on a phone because, uh, most of the time when I go store, I forget my paper on a home because with kids it's lots of work to do and uh, I prefer on a phone so it's easy for me.

✓ Before, I usually made a list on paper, but nowadays I prefer to use my phone because most of the time when I go to the store, I forget my paper at home. With kids, there is lots of work to do, so I prefer using my phone as it's easier for me.

The original sentence has multiple preposition errors: 'make a list on a paper' should be 'make a list on paper'; 'go store' should be 'go to the store'; 'forget my paper on a home' should be 'forget my paper at home'; 'prefer on a phone' should be 'prefer using my phone'. Also, tense consistency is improved by changing 'Before I usually make' to 'Before, I usually made'.