列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 你的回答表达了观点，但语言不够自然，存在语法错误和重复用词。建议简化句子结构，避免口头语“umm”，并使用更准确的词汇。

示例: Yes, I always make a shopping list before going to the supermarket because it helps me organize my thoughts, remember important items, and avoid buying unnecessary things.

建议: 回答中充满了犹豫和口头语，影响流畅度。建议减少填充词，使用连贯的句子表达观点，并具体说明清单如何帮助工作。

示例: Yes, I sometimes make to-do lists for my work because they help me manage difficult tasks and plan for the long term effectively.

建议: 回答不够清晰，语法错误较多，表达不连贯。建议使用更准确的词汇和句型，明确表达观点并举例说明。

示例: Some people dislike making lists because they believe they have a good memory and find list-making time-consuming. They might prefer using phone apps or relying on their memory instead.

建议: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不够简洁的问题。建议使用更自然的表达方式，明确比较纸质和电子清单的优缺点。

示例: In the past, I preferred writing lists on paper because it helped me remember better. However, nowadays I find phone applications more convenient, so I often use them.

× I used to put on do a shopping list before I went to the supermarket.

✓ I used to make a shopping list before I went to the supermarket.

这里动词短语使用错误，应该用'make a shopping list'而不是'put on do a shopping list'。'Make a list'是固定搭配，表示制作清单。

× it's helped me umm don't forget some important thing and also help me to avoid buying some unnecessary thing.

✓ it helps me umm not to forget some important things and also helps me to avoid buying some unnecessary things.

'thing'应使用复数形式'things'，因为指多个重要的和不必要的东西。动词时态和主谓一致也需调整。

× I just like to umm, do A to do list and uh, long term plan is really helpful for me.

✓ I just like to umm, make a to-do list and uh, a long-term plan is really helpful for me.

'do a to do list'用法不当，正确表达是'make a to-do list'。另外，'long term plan'前应加冠词'a'。

× maybe they think umm, they're so smart and always can remember some importance very quickly,

✓ maybe they think umm, they're so smart and can always remember some important things very quickly,

'importance'是不可数名词，句中应使用形容词'important'修饰复数名词'things'，即'some important things'。

× they can just to use their phone application or just remember it on their bond.

✓ they can just use their phone application or just remember it in their mind.

'just to use'中不应有'to'，应为'just use'。'remember it on their bond'表达错误，正确应为'in their mind'表示记在脑中。

× some phone application are very convenient, so sometimes I just like to choose this way.

✓ some phone applications are very convenient, so sometimes I just like to choose this way.

'application'应使用复数形式'applications'，因为前面有'some'表示复数。