列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Cevap anlaşılıyor ama dilbilgisi ve akış çok zayıf. Daha net bir konu cümlesi kullanın, gereksiz tekrarları ve dolgu seslerini (uh, so) çıkarın. Ayrıca zaman kiplerini doğru kullanın (I go / I went / I usually make). Cümleleri en çok 3-4 kısa, mantıklı destekleyici cümleyle sınırlayın. Örneğin: önce doğrudan konu cümlesi (Evet veya Hayır + neden), sonra bir veya iki destekleyici ayrıntı verin ve gerekirse bir örnek ekleyin.

示例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list before I go to the store because it helps me stay organized. For example, last weekend I planned my meals for the week and wrote down all the ingredients, so I didn’t forget anything. However, sometimes I forget to prepare a list when I'm in a hurry.

建议: Cümleler karışık ve bazı ifadeler anlaşılmaz. Önce doğrudan cevap verin (Evet/Hayır) sonra kısa bir açıklama: hangi tür listeleri yaptığınız ve bunların işe yarayıp yaramadığı. Bağlaçları (because, so, therefore) doğru kullanarak mantıklı bağlantı kurun. Konu ile ilgili spesifik bir örnek veya sonuç ekleyin.

示例: I don’t usually make lists for my job, but I do keep a weekly lesson plan because I like to follow a schedule. This method works well for me, for example, I can see what topics I need to cover each day and I rarely miss important tasks.

建议: Cevap mantıksal değil ve birçok kelime hatası içeriyor; bu nedenle açık ve basit ifadeler kullanın. Soruya doğrudan cevap verin (örneğin: Because they find it restrictive / time-consuming / unnecessary) ve ardından 1-2 somut neden veya örnek ekleyin. Dolgu kelimelerinden kaçının ve her cümlenin net bir fikri olmasına dikkat edin.

示例: Some people don’t like making lists because they find them too restrictive or time-consuming. For instance, they may prefer to decide spontaneously rather than follow a plan, or they might feel a list adds unnecessary pressure.

建议: Cevap karışık ve anlaşılması zor. Tercihinizi net söyleyin (paper or phone) ve ardından nedenini açıkça verin (örneğin: convenient, easy to edit, can't lose phone, etc.). Bir örnek veya kısa sonuç ekleyin. Gereksiz tekrar ve dolgu kelimelerini çıkartın.

示例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it’s convenient and easy to edit. For example, I can add items while I’m at home and tick them off in the shop, so I rarely forget anything.

× I am went shopping but should uh take note for for good.

✓ I went shopping but should have taken notes for good.

The student used 'am went', which mixes present 'am' with past 'went'. Use the past simple 'went' for completed actions. Additionally, 'should uh take note' refers to a past obligation, so it should be 'should have taken notes'. Improve by using correct past forms and the perfect modal 'should have' for past regret.

× Yes, usually least I'm get prepared uh then going but sometimes least not preparing so so will take a I forget.

✓ Yes, usually I get prepared before going, but sometimes I don't prepare and then I forget.

The sentence mixes tenses and incorrect word order. Use simple present 'I get prepared' for habitual actions. Use the negative 'don't prepare' for habits. 'Will take a I forget' is ungrammatical; express consequence as 'and then I forget'. Improve by keeping consistent present tense and correct subject-verb order.

× Not for job usually, but weekly lesson program I list doing because I like to work according to a plan moreover to my go else whether to watch I have got look.

✓ Not for my job usually, but I make a weekly lesson plan because I like to work according to a plan; otherwise I have to check things.

Missing articles ('my job', 'a weekly lesson plan') and very unclear phrasing. Use 'make' or 'write' a plan; include 'a' before singular countable nouns. Simplify and reorder to clarify meaning. 'I have got look' should be 'I have to check' or 'I need to check'.

× Purpose some things they, uh, might, uh, not leak like bacon, uh, they ate down.

✓ For some items, people might not like them, for example bacon; they may get eaten quickly.

Original is fragmented and meaningless ('not leak like bacon'). Likely intended 'not like' rather than 'not leak'. Reorder: 'For some items, people might not like them.' Provide a clear example and correct verb forms ('may get eaten'). Improve by forming a full clause and using appropriate vocabulary.

× So least he for, uh, loved They don't prepare.

✓ So at least he or she is not prepared. They don't prepare.

Pronoun confusion and word order error. 'So least he for, uh, loved' is ungrammatical. Clarify pronouns and use proper subject-verb order: 'He or she is not prepared.' Then 'They don't prepare' is acceptable for plural reference. Improve by choosing correct pronouns and placing verbs after subjects.

× I am perf, uh, proof **** uh, because more uh, practicing, uh, being at least uh, there's no change of for forgetting shop when I went to the market point, uh, not look tanking.

✓ I prefer to make lists on my phone because I practice more and it helps me remember; there is no chance of forgetting the items when I go to the market.

'Prefer to make a list on my phone' is the intended meaning. Original has incorrect prepositions ('of for forgetting shop') and awkward phrasing. Use 'prefer to' and 'when I go to the market'. Use 'chance' not 'change'. Improve by using correct prepositions and clear, concise clauses.