列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Cải thiện: Sửa ngữ pháp và chính tả, dùng câu chủ đề ngắn gọn và thêm một chi tiết cụ thể; nối các ý bằng liên từ phù hợp. Cụ thể: (1) “saves times” → “saves time”; (2) “Without least” → “Without it”; (3) Giữ tối đa 3–4 câu. Hãy thêm ví dụ cụ thể về một món đồ bạn thường quên để làm câu trả lời thuyết phục hơn.

示例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list before I go out, especially when I need to buy several items. It helps me stay focused and saves time in the store. For example, when I shop for groceries I always write down milk and eggs so I don't forget them.

建议: Cải thiện: Sửa cấu trúc câu và từ sai, dùng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, nối các ý mạch lạc. Cụ thể: (1) Bỏ từ thừa “Just” hoặc đặt đúng vị trí; (2) “A to do list” → “a to-do list”; (3) “It I also feel” → “I also feel”; (4) Thêm chi tiết về cách bạn sắp xếp thứ tự công việc để minh họa hiệu quả.

示例: I usually make a to-do list for my study tasks because it helps me prioritize my work. For example, I list urgent assignments first and smaller tasks later, and I feel more motivated when I can tick off completed items.

建议: Cải thiện: Sửa lỗi từ vựng và số ít/số nhiều, dùng liên từ để kết nối ý, và làm chi tiết cụ thể hơn. Cụ thể: (1) “making this” → “making lists”; (2) “Other prefer” → “Others prefer”; (3) “limit” → “limits”; (4) Thêm một dẫn chứng hoặc ví dụ ngắn để minh họa quan điểm của bạn.

示例: Some people find making lists boring or stressful because seeing many items written down can feel overwhelming. Others prefer to work spontaneously; for example, a creative person might find rigid planning restricts their ideas.

建议: Cải thiện: Hoàn thiện câu bị thiếu và thêm chi tiết cụ thể; sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và một câu chủ đề rõ ràng. Cụ thể: (1) Hoàn chỉnh “on my” → “on my phone”; (2) Thêm ví dụ về ứng dụng hoặc tính năng (ví dụ: reminders, synchronisation); (3) Giữ câu ngắn gọn và nối các ý bằng liên từ hợp lý.

示例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's more convenient and I always have it with me. I can update the list any time and set reminders or use apps that sync across devices, which helps me remember small tasks.

× It helps me stay focused and saves times in the store.

✓ It helps me stay focused and saves time in the store.

The noun 'time' is uncountable in this context, so the plural 'times' is incorrect. Use 'time' (singular/uncountable). Suggestion: use 'time' after verbs like 'save'.

× Without least I often forget important items or buy things that I don't really need.

✓ Without a list I often forget important items or buy things that I don't really need.

The phrase 'Without least' is missing the article 'a' and misorders words; 'a list' is required. This is a sentence structure and article error. Suggestion: include the correct article and word order: 'Without a list'.

× Just I often like A to do list for my study task.

✓ I often like a to-do list for my study tasks.

The original has incorrect word order and capitalization: 'Just I' is incorrect placement, 'A to do list' needs hyphens and lowercase 'a', and 'task' should be plural to match 'study tasks' or 'my study task' could be singular but sounds odd. Suggestion: place the subject before adverbs ('I often') and use 'to-do list' with hyphens and pluralize 'tasks' if referring to multiple items.

× It works well because it helps me prioritize what I need to do first.

✓ It works well because it helps me prioritize what I need to do first.

No correction needed; sentence is grammatically correct. (Included here to indicate no pronoun error.)

× It I also feel more motivated when I can take off completed tasks.

✓ I also feel more motivated when I can tick off (or cross off) completed tasks.

'It I also feel' contains an extra 'It' causing incorrect sentence structure. Also 'take off' is not the correct phrasal verb for removing tasks; use 'tick off' or 'cross off'. Suggestion: remove the extra 'It' and use the appropriate phrasal verb.

× Some people feel that making this is boring or stressful because seeing many texts written down makes them feel overwhelmed or pressured.

✓ Some people feel that making lists is boring or stressful because seeing many items written down makes them feel overwhelmed or pressured.

'Making this' is unclear and incorrect; 'lists' is the intended noun. 'Many texts' is awkward when referring to list entries—use 'many items'. This is an article/determiner and word choice issue. Suggestion: replace 'this' with 'lists' and 'texts' with 'items'.

× Other prefer to work more spontaneously and find strict planning limit their flexibility.

✓ Others prefer to work more spontaneously and find strict planning limits their flexibility.

'Other' should be plural 'Others' as the subject, and the verb 'limit' must agree with singular 'strict planning', so use 'limits'. This is a subject-verb agreement and pluralization issue. Suggestion: use 'Others' and 'limits'.

× I prefer making lists on my because it's more convenient and I always have it with me.

✓ I prefer making lists on my phone because it's more convenient and I always have it with me.

The original sentence omits the noun after the possessive 'my'. This is a preposition/determiner omission. Suggestion: add the noun 'phone' after 'my'.

× I can update the list anytime and set reminders, which helps a lot since I often forget small things.

✓ I can update the list anytime and set reminders, which helps a lot since I often forget small things.

Sentence is correct; no pronoun error. (Included to show it's acceptable.)