图书馆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Та илүү тодорхой, товч бөгөөд байгалийн хариулт өгөх хэрэгтэй. Мөн цаг хугацааны хувьд одоо болон өнгөрсөн үеийг ялгаж, зөв цагийн хэлбэр ашиглах нь чухал. Англи хэлний дүрмийн алдааг засаж, илүү холбогч үг ашиглахыг зөвлөж байна.

示例: I used to go to the library every day when I was a university student. However, now I rarely go because I am busy studying English and working part-time. Therefore, I don't have much free time to visit the library.

建议: Хариултдаа илүү тодорхой, логик холбоотой өгүүлбэрүүдийг ашиглаж, үгсийн сангаа өргөжүүлэх хэрэгтэй. Мөн сэдвийн дагуу илүү нарийвчилсан тайлбар өгөх нь зүйтэй.

示例: In the library, I usually read my medical textbooks because I am studying medicine. I have never tried reading novels or romantic books because they don't interest me.

建议: Хариултаа илүү бүтээлч, тодорхой болгох хэрэгтэй. Дүрмийн алдааг засаж, өгүүлбэрүүдийг холбох холбоос үгсийг ашиглахыг зөвлөж байна.

示例: Yes, I often went to the library when I was a high school student. I enjoyed reading funny books and sometimes I drew pictures there. The library was very relaxing, so I liked spending time there.

建议: Хариултаа илүү логик, тодорхой болгохын тулд дүрмийн алдааг засаж, холбоос үгсийг ашиглах хэрэгтэй. Мөн харьцуулалт хийхдээ илүү нарийвчилсан тайлбар өгөхийг зөвлөж байна.

示例: Yes, I think Chinese children often go to the library because they are very dedicated to their studies. In China, children spend a lot of time reading and doing homework, so libraries are popular places. However, in my country, children spend time both studying and playing games.

× Yes, but when I was university student, I go to the library every day, but now I can't because I I am learning English here and I work, I am working part time.

✓ Yes, but when I was a university student, I went to the library every day, but now I can't because I am learning English here and I am working part time.

The sentence refers to a past time ('when I was a university student'), so the verb 'go' should be in the past tense 'went'. Also, the article 'a' is missing before 'university student'. The present continuous 'I am working' is correct for current action.

× Yes, but when I was university student, I go to the library every day, but now I can't because I I am learning English here and I work, I am working part time.

✓ Yes, but when I was a university student, I went to the library every day, but now I can't because I am learning English here and I am working part time.

The noun phrase 'university student' requires the indefinite article 'a' because it is singular and countable.

× I just learning.

✓ I am just learning.

The verb 'learning' needs an auxiliary verb 'am' to form the present continuous tense. 'I just learning' is incomplete and ungrammatical.

× I read a book, I read the books, but my medicine books I don't.

✓ I read books, but I don't read my medicine books.

The phrase 'I read a book, I read the books' is inconsistent. It is better to say 'I read books' to indicate general habit. Also, 'my medicine books I don't' is ungrammatical; it should be 'I don't read my medicine books'.

× I don't any I I have never tried novels or some romantic books.

✓ I don't read any; I have never tried novels or romantic books.

The phrase 'I don't any' is incomplete and incorrect. It should be 'I don't read any'. Also, 'some romantic books' is better as 'romantic books' for general reference.

× Maybe I I don't like it.

✓ Maybe I don't like them.

The pronoun 'it' is singular but refers to 'novels or romantic books' which is plural, so 'them' is correct.

× I just say my medicine.

✓ I just study my medicine books.

The phrase 'I just say my medicine' is unclear and ungrammatical. The intended meaning is likely 'I just study my medicine books'.

× Yes, I often went to the library when I was at a high school student I enjoyed reading funny books and sometimes I draw pictures there as well Their library was is really relaxed and spend time doing things I like it because it's really.

✓ Yes, I often went to the library when I was a high school student. I enjoyed reading funny books and sometimes I drew pictures there as well. Their library was really relaxed and I spent time doing things I liked because it was really nice.

The sentence has multiple tense errors: 'draw' should be past tense 'drew'; 'was is' is incorrect, should be 'was'; 'spend' should be past tense 'spent'; 'like' should be past tense 'liked'. Also, punctuation is needed to separate ideas.

× Yes, I often went to the library when I was at a high school student I enjoyed reading funny books and sometimes I draw pictures there as well Their library was is really relaxed and spend time doing things I like it because it's really.

✓ Yes, I often went to the library when I was a high school student. I enjoyed reading funny books and sometimes I drew pictures there as well. Their library was really relaxed and I spent time doing things I liked because it was really nice.

The phrase 'at a high school student' is incorrect; it should be 'a high school student' without 'at'.

× In the China, children usually spend a lot of time reading and doing homework. So they are library so popular place for them.

✓ In China, children usually spend a lot of time reading and doing homework. So the library is a very popular place for them.

'In the China' is incorrect; 'China' does not need 'the'. Also, 'they are library so popular place' is ungrammatical; it should be 'the library is a very popular place'.

× Yes, I think so because Chinese people is they are is very dedicated to their studies.

✓ Yes, I think so because Chinese people are very dedicated to their studies.

The phrase 'Chinese people is they are is' is incorrect and redundant. The correct form is 'Chinese people are'.

× But my country is different, they are studying and playing games or something.

✓ But in my country, it is different; they study and play games or do other things.

The sentence lacks clarity and correct structure. 'They are studying and playing games or something' is vague and awkward. Using simple present 'study and play' is better for habitual actions.