图书馆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is understandable but can be improved by making it more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy like "any kind of information or whatever the" and use correct verb forms, e.g., "choose" should be "choose" → "choose" is incorrect, correct is "choose" → "choose" is present tense, but you should say "I choose" or "I prefer". Also, try to use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

示例: I don't often go to the library because I prefer using the Internet to find information quickly and easily.

建议: Your answer has good content but can be improved by making sentences clearer and more coherent. Use linking words like "because" and avoid repetition such as "I can just see, I can just enjoy seeing". Also, use correct tense consistently and avoid filler words like "So yeah".

示例: When I went to the library during my school days, I usually borrowed comic books because I enjoyed looking at the pictures, which attracted me a lot.

建议: Your answer is relevant but can be improved by avoiding repetition and making sentences more fluent. For example, avoid repeating "it's a it is" and use more precise vocabulary like "preferred books" instead of "preferable books". Also, try to connect ideas smoothly with linking words.

示例: Yes, I really enjoyed going to the library as a child because it was a quiet place where people relaxed by reading their favourite books. I also liked reading picture books that I loved.

建议: Your answer is incomplete and unclear. Try to answer directly and complete your sentences. Avoid mixing ideas about different countries without clear connection. Use linking words to explain your points logically.

示例: I'm not sure if Chinese kids often go to the library. However, in my country, schools usually set specific times for students to visit the library, which encourages them to read more.

× I don't often go to the library because I'm not the person who enjoys reading the whole book and getting information from them.

✓ I don't often go to the library because I'm not the person who enjoys reading whole books and getting information from them.

The word 'book' should be plural 'books' because it refers to reading multiple books in general, and 'them' correctly refers to the plural 'books'. This is a singular and plural agreement issue.

× I'm a person who choose Internet to get any kind of information or whatever the.

✓ I'm a person who chooses the Internet to get any kind of information or whatever.

The verb 'choose' should be 'chooses' to agree with the singular subject 'person' (third person singular). Also, 'Internet' should have the definite article 'the' before it. This is a singular and plural issue combined with article usage.

× When I go to the library in my school days, I used to take a comics book or some kind of cartoon books because I can just see, I can just enjoy seeing the pictures of the book and that attracts me actually.

✓ When I went to the library in my school days, I used to take a comic book or some kind of cartoon books because I could just see, I could just enjoy seeing the pictures of the book and that attracted me actually.

The verb 'go' should be in past tense 'went' to match 'in my school days'. 'Comics book' should be 'comic book' as 'comic' is the correct adjective. 'Can' should be 'could' to maintain past tense consistency. 'Attracts' should be 'attracted' to agree with past tense narration.

× I used to take a comics book or some kind of cartoon books because I can just see, I can just enjoy seeing the pictures of the book and that attracts me actually.

✓ I used to take a comic book or some kind of cartoon books because I could just see, I could just enjoy seeing the pictures of the books and that attracted me actually.

'Comics book' should be 'comic book' (singular). Also, 'pictures of the book' should be 'pictures of the books' to agree with plural 'cartoon books'. This is a singular and plural issue.

× So yeah, I would read this.

✓ So yeah, I would read these.

'This' is singular demonstrative pronoun but refers to plural 'comic books' or 'cartoon books', so it should be 'these'. Also, 'would read' is acceptable but 'used to read' might be better for past habitual action.

× Yes, I really enjoyed going to the library when I was a kid because it's a it is a quiet place where you can see the people relaxing there by reading their preferable books.

✓ Yes, I really enjoyed going to the library when I was a kid because it is a quiet place where you can see people relaxing there by reading their preferred books.

The phrase 'it's a it is a' is redundant; only one is needed. 'The people' should be 'people' as it refers to people in general. 'Preferable books' is incorrect; the correct adjective is 'preferred books'. This is a 'there be' and adjective usage issue.

× Then I also used to read some kind of books that I love with the pictures.

✓ Then I also used to read some kinds of books that I loved with pictures.

'Some kind of books' is incorrect; it should be 'some kinds of books' or 'some kinds of books'. Also, 'love' should be 'loved' to maintain past tense. 'With the pictures' can be simplified to 'with pictures'. This is a singular and plural and past tense issue.

× I really don't know about the Chinese kids would like to go to the library, but in my country people used to go to the library from their school itself because in school management used to set a specific time for visiting the library, which makes the.

✓ I really don't know whether Chinese kids would like to go to the library, but in my country people used to go to the library from their school itself because the school management used to set a specific time for visiting the library, which made it easier.

The phrase 'don't know about the Chinese kids would like' is incorrect; it should be 'don't know whether Chinese kids would like'. 'In school management' should be 'the school management'. The sentence was incomplete; 'which makes the' is incomplete and corrected to 'which made it easier' for clarity. This is a modal verb usage and sentence structure issue.