图书馆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is a bit long and has some grammar mistakes. Try to make your sentences shorter and more natural. Also, avoid repeating the same idea. For example, say directly if you like comics and why.

示例: Yes, I often go to the library because I enjoy reading comic books. They make me happy and there are many kinds to choose from, which brightens my day.

建议: Your answer is unclear and has some grammar errors. Try to organize your ideas logically and use linking words. Also, avoid unnecessary details and focus on what you do in the library.

示例: Usually, I sit in a quiet corner of the library and read comic books. Reading them relaxes me and makes me laugh, so I really enjoy my time there.

建议: Your answer is good but has some grammar mistakes and redundancy. Try to use correct verb forms and avoid repeating the same idea. Also, use linking words to connect your sentences.

示例: No, I didn't go to a library as a child because I lived in a village where there were no libraries. However, after moving to the city, I started visiting libraries.

建议: Your answer is unclear and contains many grammar errors. Try to answer directly and clearly. If you don't know, say so briefly without unnecessary details.

示例: I'm not sure about Chinese kids because I have lived in Nepal all my life and don't have much information about China.

× Basically, I am not the huge fan of the books, but I often go to the library.

✓ Basically, I am not a huge fan of books, but I often go to the library.

The definite article 'the' is incorrectly used before 'huge fan' and 'books'. We use 'a' before singular countable nouns when mentioning them for the first time, and no article before plural general nouns like 'books'.

× when I went to the library I studied the comics books because it makes me very happy

✓ when I went to the library I studied comic books because they make me very happy

'Comics books' is incorrect; the correct plural form is 'comic books'. Also, 'it' should be 'they' to agree with the plural subject 'comic books'.

× there is so many kinds of the comics that makes my day

✓ there are so many kinds of comics that make my day

'There is' should be 'there are' for plural 'kinds'. Also, 'the comics' should be 'comics' without 'the'. The verb 'makes' should be 'make' to agree with plural 'kinds'.

× there is so many kinds of the comics that makes my day

✓ there are so many kinds of comics that make my day

The verb 'makes' does not agree with the plural subject 'kinds'. It should be 'make'.

× I just love it when I read it.

✓ I just love them when I read them.

'It' is singular but refers to plural 'comic books', so 'them' should be used instead.

× I usually sit at the corner of the library and be in myself by reading the comic book.

✓ I usually sit in the corner of the library and be by myself reading comic books.

'Sit at the corner' should be 'sit in the corner'. 'Be in myself' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'be by myself'. Also, 'the comic book' should be 'comic books' for general reference.

× And when I just read it, like it makes my tea and it feels so relaxed when I read it because it makes me happy.

✓ And when I just read them, it makes my day and I feel so relaxed because it makes me happy.

'Read it' should be 'read them' to refer to plural 'comic books'. 'Makes my tea' is incorrect; likely intended 'makes my day'. 'It feels so relaxed' should be 'I feel so relaxed'.

× So I used a little seat and.

✓ So I used a little seat.

The sentence is incomplete and unclear. Assuming the intended meaning is 'I used a little seat', which is past tense and correct.

× No, I didn't go to a library when I was a kid because I was living in the village and have spent my childhood in the village.

✓ No, I didn't go to the library when I was a kid because I was living in a village and spent my childhood there.

'A library' should be 'the library' if referring to a specific library. 'The village' should be 'a village' when mentioning it for the first time. 'Have spent' should be 'spent' to maintain past tense consistency.

× So usually there are not library in the village.

✓ So usually there is no library in the village.

'There are not library' is incorrect; 'library' is singular, so 'there is no library' is correct.

× So I didn't get any chance to study or to went in the library.

✓ So I didn't get any chance to study or to go to the library.

'Went' is past tense; after 'to' we use the base form 'go'. Also, 'in the library' should be 'to the library'.

× So when I further move in the city I went there.

✓ So when I moved to the city, I went there.

'Move' should be past tense 'moved' to match the past context. 'In the city' should be 'to the city'.

× I don't know about that because I am a Nepalese student, so I basically know about the Nepali sounding and I just spent my whole life in the Nepal.

✓ I don't know about that because I am a Nepalese student, so I basically know about Nepal and I have spent my whole life in Nepal.

'Nepali sounding' is incorrect; likely meant 'Nepal'. 'In the Nepal' should be 'in Nepal'. Present perfect 'have spent' is better for life experience.

× So I didn't go go to the China to have a knowledge about the Chinese skater because different place have a different kinds of the environment and different situation.

✓ So I didn't go to China to gain knowledge about Chinese culture because different places have different kinds of environments and situations.

Removed duplicate 'go'. 'The China' should be 'China'. 'Have a knowledge' should be 'gain knowledge'. 'Chinese skater' is unclear; likely 'Chinese culture'. 'Place' and 'environment' should be plural to agree with 'different'.