图书馆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is understandable but has some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. For example, "I have a college" should be "I am in college" or "I attend college." Also, avoid redundancy like "I do go"; simply say "Yes, I often go to the library." Try to make your sentences more natural and concise. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

示例: Yes, I often go to the library because I am preparing for my college applications. I usually go there with my friends or my sister to study together.

建议: Your answer covers the main activities but could be improved by using better linking words and correcting tense errors. For example, "when I got hungry" should be "when I get hungry." Also, try to avoid listing activities without connection; use linking words like "and then" or "after that" to make your answer more coherent.

示例: I usually study on my computer or read books from the library. When I get hungry, I go to the eating area and have lunch with my friends.

建议: Your answer is clear but has some grammatical mistakes and repetition. For example, "I I'd rather to go" should be "I preferred to go." Also, avoid repeating words like "really" and "with." Try to use more varied vocabulary and link your ideas smoothly.

示例: I didn't go to the library much as a child because I found it boring. I preferred to play outside with my friends instead.

建议: Your answer is honest but could be more concise and grammatically correct. For example, "Chinese kid" should be "Chinese kids," and "I don't really have Chinese friend" should be "I don't really have Chinese friends." Also, avoid repeating phrases like "I've never." Try to express your uncertainty clearly and briefly.

示例: I'm not sure about Chinese kids because I have never been to China and don't have many Chinese friends. So, I haven't heard if they often go to the library.

× Yes, I do go to library very often because I have a college.

✓ Yes, I do go to the library very often because I have a college.

In English, when referring to a specific place like 'library', the definite article 'the' is required. Saying 'go to library' is incorrect; it should be 'go to the library'.

× I have to study for my college application so I would I usually go there with my friends or my sister.

✓ I have to study for my college application, so I usually go there with my friends or my sister.

The phrase 'would I usually go' is incorrect here. The modal verb 'would' is unnecessary and disrupts the sentence structure. Removing 'would' corrects the sentence.

× I usually study on my computer or I read a book from the library and when I got hungry I go to the eating space and eat the lunch with my friends.

✓ I usually study on my computer or read a book from the library, and when I get hungry, I go to the eating area and eat lunch with my friends.

The phrase 'eat the lunch' is incorrect; 'eat lunch' is the correct expression without 'the'. Also, 'eating space' is better expressed as 'eating area'. Additionally, 'got hungry' should be 'get hungry' to maintain present tense.

× I didn't really go there because it was not really fun for me.

✓ I didn't really go there because it was not very fun for me.

The phrase 'not really fun' is awkward; 'not very fun' is more natural in this context.

× I I'd rather to go outside and play with with my friends.

✓ I'd rather go outside and play with my friends.

The phrase 'I'd rather to go' is incorrect; 'rather' is followed directly by the base form of the verb without 'to'. Also, 'with with' is a repetition error.

× Well I don't know much about Chinese kid because I've never been to China before or I don't really have Chinese friend so I I've never heard of someone say the Chinese kids are growing up going to library very often.

✓ Well, I don't know much about Chinese kids because I've never been to China before, and I don't really have Chinese friends, so I've never heard anyone say that Chinese kids grow up going to the library very often.

The singular 'kid' should be plural 'kids' to match the context. 'Friend' should be plural 'friends'. 'Going to library' requires the article 'the library'. Also, sentence structure and conjunctions were improved for clarity.