图书馆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is somewhat natural but has grammatical errors and incomplete sentences. Try to make your sentences complete and clear, for example, avoid ending with 'easy to' without completing the thought. Also, avoid redundancy like 'on every weekend as well as my weekdays whenever I get free time.' Instead, be concise and clear.

示例: Yes, I often visit the library on weekends and sometimes on weekdays when I have free time because it is a quiet place to study.

建议: Your answer has good content but contains grammatical mistakes and incomplete sentences. Avoid saying 'visit to the library' (just say 'visit the library'). Also, complete your sentences fully and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Try to be more specific and clear about what you study and why.

示例: I usually visit the library to research topics related to my banking job. For example, I read financial reports and articles about financial inclusion to improve my knowledge and stay updated on the financial market.

建议: Your answer is incomplete and unclear. Try to complete your sentences and explain your reasons clearly. For example, mention that you lived in a village where there was no library. Use linking words to make your answer coherent.

示例: No, I did not go to the library when I was a kid because I lived in a native village where there was no library available.

建议: Your answer has some good points but contains grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Use correct plural forms and tenses, and try to use linking words to contrast ideas. For example, say 'many Chinese students read ebooks on the Internet, but some still go to the library to study.'

示例: No, many Chinese students prefer reading ebooks on the Internet, but some students still go to the library to study.

× Yes, I frequently visit the library on every weekend as well as my weekdays whenever I get free time.

✓ Yes, I frequently visit the library every weekend as well as on my weekdays whenever I get free time.

The phrase 'on every weekend' is incorrect; 'every weekend' is the correct expression without 'on'. Also, 'on my weekdays' is needed to indicate specific days. The adverb placement and preposition use need correction for natural English.

× It is quiet and easy to.

✓ It is quiet and easy to access.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'easy to' which is incomplete. It needs an object or verb to complete the meaning. Adding 'access' completes the sentence logically.

× Actually, I usually visit to the library to do research related to my work as a banker.

✓ Actually, I usually visit the library to do research related to my work as a banker.

The verb 'visit' does not require the preposition 'to' after it. Removing 'to' corrects the sentence.

× I used to study financial reports and articles regarding financial inclusion to improve my banking knowledge and stay updated in financial position of.

✓ I used to study financial reports and articles regarding financial inclusion to improve my banking knowledge and stay updated on the financial position.

The phrase 'stay updated in financial position of' is incorrect. The correct preposition is 'on' and the phrase needs to be completed properly. 'On the financial position' is correct.

× No, I did not go to the library when I was a kid because in my childhood I.

✓ No, I did not go to the library when I was a kid because during my childhood I...

The sentence is incomplete and ends abruptly. 'Because in my childhood I' is incomplete; it should be 'because during my childhood I...' followed by a complete thought.

× I In my childhood I was in our native village, and there was no.

✓ In my childhood, I was in our native village, and there was no library.

The sentence is incomplete and has repetition 'I In'. It needs to be corrected for clarity and completion. Adding 'library' completes the meaning.

× No, actually I think many of Chinese student used to read ebook from Internet and some of the students used to go to the library to study.

✓ No, actually I think many Chinese students use ebooks from the Internet and some of the students go to the library to study.

'Many of Chinese student' is incorrect; it should be 'many Chinese students' (plural). 'Used to read ebook' is incorrect for habitual present action; 'use ebooks' is correct. 'Ebook' should be plural 'ebooks'. Also, 'from Internet' should be 'from the Internet'.