图书馆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Vaša odpoveď je trochu nejasná a obsahuje opakovanie slov (napr. "where where"). Odporúčam odpovedať priamo na otázku, použiť jednoduché a jasné vety a vyhnúť sa zbytočným opakovaniam. Tiež by ste mohli pridať dôvod, prečo často alebo zriedka chodíte do knižnice.

示例: I don't often go to the library in Bratislava because I usually study at home. Once, I tried to visit the library, but it was closed, so I haven't been back since then.

建议: Vaša odpoveď je trochu nejasná a obsahuje chyby v slovoslede a výbere slov (napr. "it's really good to play"). Odporúčam použiť jasné a presné vety, vyhnúť sa opakovaniu a použiť vhodné spojky na lepšiu koherenciu.

示例: I usually study in the library because it is quiet and free from distractions. There are no loud noises or people talking, which helps me concentrate better on my schoolwork.

建议: Vaša odpoveď je celkom dobrá, ale obsahuje niekoľko gramatických chýb a opakovanie slov (napr. "readings reading"). Odporúčam zlepšiť gramatiku a použiť presnejšie výrazy, aby bola odpoveď prirodzenejšia.

示例: No, I didn't go to the library as a child because there wasn't one near my home. I lived in a village, and the nearest city was about 50 kilometers away. However, I would have liked to visit because I enjoy reading books.

建议: Vaša odpoveď je nejasná a obsahuje opakovania a neformálne výrazy (napr. "like I don't know how to answer"). Odporúčam odpovedať priamo, vyhnúť sa opakovaniam a použiť vhodné spojky na lepšiu plynulosť odpovede.

示例: I'm not completely sure, but I believe Chinese children often visit libraries. From what I've seen on TV and read in newspapers, many Chinese kids go to libraries to study and improve their knowledge.

× I have never been in a library in Bratislava.

✓ I have never been to a library in Bratislava.

The correct preposition to use with 'been' when referring to visiting a place is 'to', not 'in'. 'Been to' indicates visiting a place, while 'been in' suggests being inside, which is less common in this context.

× That's the city where where I study university and I don't know why.

✓ That's the city where I study at university and I don't know why.

The phrase 'study university' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'study at university'. The preposition 'at' is necessary to indicate the place of study.

× I told that this is the way it should be and I shouldn't visit library anymore in Bratislava.

✓ I told myself that this is the way it should be and I shouldn't visit the library anymore in Bratislava.

The verb 'told' requires an object; here, 'myself' is the correct reflexive pronoun. Also, 'library' needs the definite article 'the' because it refers to a specific library.

× I shouldn't visit library anymore in Bratislava.

✓ I shouldn't visit the library anymore in Bratislava.

When referring to a specific place known to both speaker and listener, the definite article 'the' is required before 'library'.

× I study in the library because I think that it is the place that is really good for studying because everywhere is quiet, there are no noises or people who are laughing or speaking loudly, and it's really good to play.

✓ I study in the library because I think that it is a place that is really good for studying because everywhere is quiet, there is no noise or people laughing or speaking loudly, and it's really good for concentration.

'Everywhere is quiet' is acceptable, but 'there are no noises' should be 'there is no noise' as 'noise' is uncountable. Also, 'people who are laughing or speaking loudly' is better as 'people laughing or speaking loudly' for conciseness. 'It's really good to play' is unclear; likely intended meaning is 'good for concentration' or 'good for studying'.

× So for learning to school something.

✓ So for learning something for school.

The phrase 'learning to school something' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'learning something for school' to indicate the purpose of learning.

× No, I haven't been there before like in my childhood because we didn't have a library near to our house.

✓ No, I hadn't been there before, like in my childhood, because we didn't have a library near our house.

When referring to a past time before another past event, past perfect 'hadn't been' is more appropriate. Also, 'near to our house' should be 'near our house' as 'near' does not require 'to'.

× I live in a village so the nearest city is like 50 kilometers far away, so I don't have the opportunity to go to the library.

✓ I live in a village, so the nearest city is about 50 kilometers away, so I don't have the opportunity to go to the library.

The phrase '50 kilometers far away' is incorrect; the correct expression is '50 kilometers away' or 'about 50 kilometers away'. 'Like' is informal and should be replaced with 'about' for clarity.

× But I really would like to go because I like books and readings reading.

✓ But I really would like to go because I like books and reading.

The word 'readings' is incorrect here; the correct noun is 'reading' to refer to the activity. Also, 'and readings reading' is redundant and should be simplified to 'and reading'.

× I'm not sure about this question, like I don't know how to answer, but I think they often go to the library like what I saw on the TV, like in newspapers for example, I saw that they go often to the library because Chinese kids are so smart.

✓ I'm not sure about this question; I don't know how to answer, but I think they often go to the library, like what I saw on TV and in newspapers. For example, I saw that they often go to the library because Chinese kids are very smart.

The phrase 'like what I saw on the TV' should be 'like what I saw on TV' (no 'the'). Also, 'like in newspapers for example' is better as 'and in newspapers, for example'. The adverb 'often' should be placed before the verb 'go'.

× I think they have to go there to be so smart as they are.

✓ I think they have to go there to be as smart as they are.

The correct comparative structure is 'as smart as', not 'so smart as'. 'So...as' is incorrect in this context.