图书馆— Part 1 评分报告
对话
Part 1
考官
Do you often go to the library?
考生
To be honest, reading book is not really makeup thing so I just rarely go to the library with some of my friends or my family.
考官
What do you usually do in the library?
考生
As I have said before, I rarely go to the library, so the only thing that the only reason that let me go to the library is that I have to borrow some kind.
考官
Did you go to the library when you were a kid?
考生
No, actually I don't really often go to the library when I was in my childhood.
考官
Do Chinese kids often go to the library?
考生
Oh, I don't know.
评估
总分
Part 1
Do you often go to the library?
分数: 50.0建议: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự tự nhiên và có lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, tránh dùng cụm từ không phù hợp như "makeup thing" và nên sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, rõ ràng hơn.
示例: No, I don't often go to the library because I prefer reading books at home. However, sometimes I go there with my friends or family to borrow books.
What do you usually do in the library?
分数: 40.0建议: Câu trả lời của bạn không rõ ràng và có lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, tránh lặp từ và nói rõ hoạt động bạn làm khi đến thư viện.
示例: Usually, I go to the library only to borrow books because I don't spend much time there.
Did you go to the library when you were a kid?
分数: 45.0建议: Bạn nên sử dụng thì quá khứ đơn cho hành động trong quá khứ và câu trả lời nên rõ ràng hơn. Tránh dùng cấu trúc sai ngữ pháp như "don't really often go".
示例: No, I didn't often go to the library when I was a child because I preferred reading at home.
Do Chinese kids often go to the library?
分数: 30.0建议: Câu trả lời quá ngắn và không cung cấp thông tin. Bạn nên cố gắng đưa ra ý kiến hoặc dự đoán dựa trên hiểu biết của mình để làm câu trả lời phong phú hơn.
示例: I think some Chinese kids often go to the library to study, but others might prefer using the internet at home.
语法
× To be honest, reading book is not really makeup thing so I just rarely go to the library with some of my friends or my family.
✓ To be honest, reading books is not really my thing so I just rarely go to the library with some of my friends or my family.
The noun 'book' should be plural 'books' because it refers to reading in general, which is countable and usually plural in this context. Also, 'makeup thing' is incorrect; it should be 'my thing' to express personal preference.
× As I have said before, I rarely go to the library, so the only thing that the only reason that let me go to the library is that I have to borrow some kind.
✓ As I have said before, I rarely go to the library, so the only reason that lets me go to the library is that I have to borrow some books.
The sentence is repetitive and incomplete. 'The only thing that the only reason' is redundant. Also, 'let' should be 'lets' to agree with singular subject 'reason'. 'Some kind' is incomplete; it should be 'some books' or 'some kind of books'.
× No, actually I don't really often go to the library when I was in my childhood.
✓ No, actually I didn't really often go to the library when I was a child.
The sentence mixes present tense 'don't' with past time 'when I was in my childhood'. It should use past tense 'didn't' to match the past time. Also, 'in my childhood' is better expressed as 'when I was a child'.
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