图书馆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn nên tự nhiên hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như "spend almost the time". Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp và rõ ràng hơn, ví dụ: "I don't often go to the library because I usually study at home."

示例: I don't often go to the library because I usually study at home where I feel more comfortable and have all my materials.

建议: Bạn nên sử dụng câu trả lời có cấu trúc rõ ràng hơn và dùng từ vựng phù hợp. Ví dụ, thay vì "I'll easily find IELTS book", bạn có thể nói "I usually find IELTS books to read because I want to improve my English and keep up with current news."

示例: In the library, I usually find IELTS books to read because I want to improve my English skills and stay updated with the latest news.

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và thiếu sự mạch lạc. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp và rõ ràng hơn, ví dụ: "No, I didn't go to the library as a child because there was no library in my village. Instead, I spent time playing with my friends."

示例: No, I didn't go to the library when I was a kid because there was no library in my village. Instead, I spent most of my time playing with my friends.

建议: Bạn nên trả lời ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Ví dụ: "I live in Vietnam, so I don't know much about China. However, I think Chinese children often visit libraries with their parents to learn new things."

示例: I live in Vietnam, so I don't know much about China. However, I believe that Chinese children often go to libraries with their parents to learn new things.

× Actually, I don't often go to the library because I spend almost the time to study at home.

✓ Actually, I don't often go to the library because I spend most of the time studying at home.

The phrase 'almost the time' is incorrect; it should be 'most of the time' to express frequency. Also, 'to study' should be changed to 'studying' to correctly follow 'spend' which requires a verb in the -ing form.

× I'll easily find IELTS book to read.

✓ I can easily find IELTS books to read.

The noun 'book' should be plural 'books' because it refers to multiple items. Also, 'I'll' (I will) is less appropriate here; 'I can' better expresses ability or possibility.

× I want to improve my English and learn some news.

✓ I want to improve my English and learn some news.

The word 'news' is uncountable and does not take 'some' in this context. It is better to say 'learn some new things' or 'learn news' depending on meaning. Here, 'learn some new things' is more appropriate.

× No, when I walk in I spend all the time playing with my friend because in my village there there are no library, so I am. Don't go to library.

✓ No, when I was young I spent all the time playing with my friends because in my village there was no library, so I didn't go to the library.

The verbs should be in past tense to match the time frame. 'Walk in' is incorrect; 'was young' or 'was a kid' fits better. 'Spend' should be 'spent'. 'Friend' should be plural 'friends'. 'There are no library' should be 'there was no library'. 'I am. Don't go' is incorrect; it should be 'I didn't go'. Also, 'to library' needs the article 'the'.

× No, when I walk in I spend all the time playing with my friend because in my village there there are no library, so I am. Don't go to library.

✓ No, when I was young I spent all the time playing with my friends because in my village there was no library, so I didn't go to the library.

The preposition 'to' before 'library' requires the definite article 'the' to be correct: 'go to the library'.

× I live in Vietnam so I don't have any knowledge about China, but I think China is a developed country so Chinese kids can be taken to the library when they were young age by their parents so they can learn many thing new things.

✓ I live in Vietnam so I don't have any knowledge about China, but I think China is a developed country so Chinese kids can be taken to the library when they are young by their parents so they can learn many new things.

The phrase 'when they were young age' is incorrect; it should be 'when they are young' to express a general truth. 'Many thing new things' is redundant and incorrect; it should be 'many new things'.