图书馆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 你嘅答案有啲語法錯誤同埋表達唔夠自然，例如「I'm enjoying the feeling that lose myself in those books」應該改為「I enjoy losing myself in books」。另外，答案可以更簡潔同流暢，避免重複。

示例: Yes, I often go to the library because I enjoy losing myself in books. I find it meaningful as reading teaches me a lot.

建议: 你嘅答案有啲語法錯誤，例如「homeworks」應該係「homework」。另外，句子結構可以更自然，並用連接詞令答案更流暢。

示例: I usually read books and finish my homework in the library because I have a lot of assignments as a student.

建议: 你嘅答案有明顯語法錯誤，例如「though I were a kid」應該係「when I was a kid」。句子結構唔夠清晰，建議簡化並用連接詞令答案更自然。

示例: Yes, I did. When I was a kid, I was very interested in books, so I still go to the library to learn useful things.

建议: 你嘅答案唔夠清晰同自然，句子結構有問題，例如「Sunshine kids」唔係常用詞彙，應該用更普遍嘅表達。建議用更具體嘅例子同連接詞。

示例: It's hard to say, but many Chinese kids prefer going to the park to play sports rather than visiting the library.

× I like the books and I'm enjoying the feeling that lose myself in those books.

✓ I like the books and I'm enjoying the feeling of losing myself in those books.

The verb 'lose' should be in the gerund form 'losing' after the preposition 'of' to correctly express the action of immersing oneself in books.

× I think it's meaningful and the books taught me a lot.

✓ I think it's meaningful and the books have taught me a lot.

The present perfect tense 'have taught' is appropriate here to indicate that the teaching effect of the books continues up to the present.

× Oh, I usually read books and finish some homeworks.

✓ Oh, I usually read books and finish some homework.

The noun 'homework' is uncountable and should not be pluralized as 'homeworks'.

× Yes, I did, though I were a kid, I. Was very interested in books, so no matter what ages I am, I still go to the library to learn some useful knowledge.

✓ Yes, I did. Though I was a kid, I was very interested in books, so no matter what age I am, I still go to the library to learn some useful knowledge.

The correct past tense of 'be' for first person singular is 'was' not 'were'. Also, 'age' should be singular when referring to a general time in life.

× As far as I see the answer is hard to say. Sunshine kids prefer go to the park and do some sports.

✓ As far as I see, the answer is hard to say. Sunshine kids prefer to go to the park and do some sports.

The verb 'prefer' should be followed by the infinitive form 'to go' rather than the base form 'go'. Also, a comma is needed after 'As far as I see' for clarity.