图书馆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer needs to be more grammatically correct and concise. Use past tense consistently when talking about college time. Avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure for clarity. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

示例: When I was in college, I often went to the library because classes sometimes started late or teachers were absent. Therefore, I preferred to spend time there reading books not only for exams but also to gain knowledge. I really liked the library because it was a very quiet place.

建议: Try to organize your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details using linking words. Also, improve grammar and vocabulary to express your ideas more clearly and naturally.

示例: In the library, I usually read various books such as novels, chemistry, and physics books to prepare for my exams. However, I especially enjoy reading English books because they help me improve my speaking and reading skills, enabling me to communicate confidently with strangers.

建议: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Use past tense consistently and structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Avoid repetition and improve coherence with linking words.

示例: No, I did not go to the library when I was a kid because I was not aware that there was a library in my area. My first experience of going to a library was when I started college, and I really liked that place.

建议: Your answer is confusing and lacks clarity. Try to give a direct answer with clear reasons and examples. Use simple and correct sentences with appropriate linking words to explain your opinion.

示例: I think Chinese kids do not often go to the library because their parents and grandparents prefer them to learn skills at home. They focus more on practical skills rather than spending time in the library.

× When I was in my college, I often go to the library because sometimes classes are not start on time and sometimes teacher was absent.

✓ When I was in college, I often went to the library because sometimes classes did not start on time and sometimes the teacher was absent.

The sentence refers to past events, so the verbs should be in the past tense. 'Go' should be 'went', 'are not start' should be 'did not start', and 'teacher was absent' is correct but needs 'the' before 'teacher' for specificity.

× So I prefer to go on a library to read some books for the exams, not only the exams but for my own knowledge.

✓ So I prefer to go to the library to read some books for the exams, not only for the exams but for my own knowledge.

The correct preposition with 'go' and 'library' is 'to', not 'on'. Also, 'for the exams' should be repeated for clarity.

× So yeah, I really often to go library.

✓ So yeah, I really often go to the library.

The phrase 'really often to go library' is incorrect. 'Often' is an adverb and should be placed before the verb 'go'. Also, 'to go library' needs the preposition 'to the library'.

× That's a very quiet place and I really like it.

✓ That's a very quiet place, and I really like it.

The sentence is correct in article usage; a comma is added for clarity. No article error here.

× I usually read books, novels, chemistry books, physics books for to prepare them for my exam.

✓ I usually read books, novels, chemistry books, and physics books to prepare for my exam.

The phrase 'for to prepare' is incorrect; it should be 'to prepare'. Also, 'them' is unnecessary and removed for clarity.

× But I really love the English books because it helps me a lot to speak like I can speak, I can talk to the stranger and I can read in English so it helps me.

✓ But I really love English books because they help me a lot to speak; I can talk to strangers and read in English, so they help me.

'English books' does not need 'the' here. 'It' should be 'they' to agree with plural 'books'. 'Stranger' should be plural 'strangers'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and correct conjunction use.

× No, I really don't go to the library when I work at because I don't know that time that library exists in our area or in our city.

✓ No, I really didn't go to the library when I was working because I didn't know at that time that a library existed in our area or in our city.

The sentence refers to past events, so present tense verbs 'don't go', 'don't know', and 'exists' should be in past tense: 'didn't go', 'didn't know', 'existed'. Also, 'when I work at' is incorrect; it should be 'when I was working'. The article 'a' is added before 'library'.

× But whenever I when I grew up and I went to the college.

✓ But whenever I grew up and went to college.

The phrase 'whenever I when I grew up' is redundant; 'whenever' or 'when' should be used, not both. 'Went to the college' should be 'went to college' as 'college' is used generally here.

× So yeah, that was the first experience for me into the library and I really like that place.

✓ So yeah, that was my first experience in the library, and I really liked that place.

'The first experience for me into the library' is awkward; 'my first experience in the library' is correct. Also, 'like' should be past tense 'liked' to match past context.

× I think no, Chinese kids often do not often go to the library because of their parents who don't have their grandparents would learn a lot from them like they were.

✓ I think no, Chinese kids do not often go to the library because their parents and grandparents would learn a lot from them like they used to.

The phrase 'often do not often' is redundant; 'do not often' is sufficient. The sentence structure is confusing; 'because of their parents who don't have their grandparents' is incorrect. It is corrected to 'because their parents and grandparents would learn a lot from them like they used to' for clarity.

× They have to keep their children more skillful and more reliable.

✓ They have to make their children more skillful and more reliable.

'Keep their children more skillful' is incorrect; 'make their children more skillful' is appropriate. The pronoun usage is correct but the verb choice is wrong.