图书馆— Part 1 评分报告
对话
Part 1
考官
Do you often go to the library?
考生
I rarely go to the library because nowadays we can easily use some Internet resources to find a book that we need an article. Everything that we need is now available somewhere else, except for the library.
考官
What do you usually do in the library?
考生
Frankly speaking, last time I was in the library when I was nearly 11 years old, but during that time I was picking up some books for children and quietly reading them somewhere in the corner of the library. Because actually, what else would I do in the library except for reading?
考官
Did you go to the library when you were a kid?
考生
Yes, I went many times to library when I was a kid. I loved to picking up some interesting books, novels, kids literature. I learned to read when I was maybe 3 years old and that was my favorite entertainment.
考官
Do Chinese kids often go to the library?
考生
To be honest, I've never think of that. I'm not a Chinese girl. I grew up in Russia. So. Well, I suggest that yes, because Asian people are tend to be more clever than European people. Statistics shows it. And yeah.
评估
总分
Part 1
Do you often go to the library?
分数: 65.0建议: Ваш ответ немного длинный и содержит некоторые грамматические ошибки. Постарайтесь сделать ответ более естественным и лаконичным, избегая избыточности. Например, используйте более точные выражения и правильные предлоги.
示例: I rarely go to the library because I can easily find books and articles online nowadays.
What do you usually do in the library?
分数: 60.0建议: Ответ слишком длинный и немного неструктурированный. Используйте связующие слова для логичности и избегайте повторений. Также старайтесь отвечать прямо на вопрос, добавляя конкретные детали.
示例: The last time I visited the library was when I was about 11 years old. I usually picked up children's books and read quietly in a corner because reading is the main activity there.
Did you go to the library when you were a kid?
分数: 70.0建议: В ответе есть грамматические ошибки и нечеткие формулировки. Используйте правильные формы глаголов и более разнообразную лексику, чтобы сделать ответ более естественным и точным.
示例: Yes, I often went to the library as a child. I loved picking up interesting books and novels. I learned to read when I was about three years old, and reading was my favorite pastime.
Do Chinese kids often go to the library?
分数: 40.0建议: Ответ содержит неуместные обобщения и грамматические ошибки. Избегайте стереотипов и отвечайте более нейтрально и уважительно. Также старайтесь использовать связующие слова и точные выражения.
示例: I am not sure about Chinese children, as I grew up in Russia. However, I believe many children around the world enjoy going to the library to read and learn.
语法
× I loved to picking up some interesting books, novels, kids literature.
✓ I loved picking up some interesting books, novels, kids literature.
The verb 'love' is followed by the gerund form without 'to'. The correct structure is 'love doing something', not 'love to doing something'. Therefore, 'to picking up' should be corrected to 'picking up'.
× Yes, I went many times to library when I was a kid.
✓ Yes, I went to the library many times when I was a kid.
The phrase 'went many times to library' has incorrect word order and missing article. The correct order is 'went to the library many times'. Also, 'library' requires the definite article 'the' because it refers to a specific place.
× I've never think of that.
✓ I've never thought of that.
The verb 'think' should be in the past participle form 'thought' after 'have' in the present perfect tense. 'Never think' is incorrect; it should be 'never thought'.
× Statistics shows it.
✓ Statistics show it.
The noun 'statistics' is plural, so the verb should be 'show' instead of 'shows' to agree in number.
× Asian people are tend to be more clever than European people.
✓ Asian people tend to be more clever than European people.
The phrase 'are tend to be' is incorrect. The verb 'tend' is used without 'are' in this context. The correct form is 'tend to be'.
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