图书馆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to make your response more natural and concise by directly answering the question and providing clear reasons. Avoid redundancy and incorrect phrases like 'name preparation' and 'the place there is quite enough'.

示例: I don't visit the library often now, but I used to go frequently when I was preparing for exams because it was quiet and had plenty of study materials.

建议: Your answer lacks clarity and has grammatical mistakes. Try to structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details using linking words. Also, avoid incomplete sentences and improve vocabulary usage.

示例: When I visit the library, I usually read my biology books because they require a lot of concentration. Moreover, the quiet environment helps me focus better and understand the material quickly.

建议: Your answer is repetitive and contains grammatical errors. Try to answer directly and use linking words to connect your ideas. Also, avoid repeating phrases and improve sentence structure.

示例: No, I didn't often go to the library as a kid. However, during my school days, we occasionally visited the school library to study and read books.

建议: Your answer is unclear and contains errors. Try to express your opinion clearly and use correct grammar. Also, avoid vague phrases like 'Chinese gate' and provide specific information with linking words.

示例: I am not sure about Chinese children in general, but in my hometown, kids rarely visit the library when they are young. However, they tend to go more often after they turn 18.

× I don't go often to the library, but I used to go when I was preparing for my name preparation because the place there is quite enough and it's easy for me to grab things to learn.

✓ I don't often go to the library, but I used to go when I was preparing for my name preparation because the place there is quite enough and it's easy for me to grab things to learn.

The adverb 'often' should be placed before the main verb 'go' in this sentence for correct English word order. Placing 'often' after 'go' is incorrect. So, 'I don't often go' is the correct form.

× When I used to visit library, I personally go for reading things such as my biology book which requires a lot of time as and also need a environment to read it.

✓ When I used to visit the library, I personally go to read things such as my biology book which requires a lot of time and also needs an environment to read it.

The noun 'library' requires the definite article 'the' before it. Also, the phrase 'go for reading' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'go to read'. Additionally, 'need a environment' should be 'needs an environment' because 'environment' starts with a vowel sound and the verb must agree with the singular subject.

× I used to get all of things and helps me to.

✓ I used to get all of the things and it helps me.

The phrase 'all of things' is missing the definite article 'the' before 'things'. Also, 'helps me to' is incomplete and should be 'it helps me' to form a complete sentence. The verb 'helps' must agree with the singular subject 'it'.

× No, when I was a kid I don't go library usually.

✓ No, when I was a kid I didn't usually go to the library.

The verb tense should be past ('didn't') to match 'when I was a kid'. The verb 'go' requires the preposition 'to' before 'the library'. Also, 'usually' should be placed before the main verb for correct adverb placement.

× It was an occasionally visit in my school itself.

✓ It was an occasional visit in my school itself.

The word 'occasionally' is an adverb, but here an adjective 'occasional' is needed to modify the noun 'visit'. Also, 'in my school itself' is acceptable but could be improved for clarity.

× I used to go library when in my school days.

✓ I used to go to the library during my school days.

The verb 'go' requires the preposition 'to' before 'the library'. Also, 'when in my school days' is awkward; 'during my school days' is the correct phrase to indicate the time period.

× It was a period in which in which we visit library and study some stuff and books.

✓ It was a period during which we visited the library and studied some materials and books.

The phrase 'in which in which' is repetitive and incorrect. Also, the verb tense should be past ('visited', 'studied') to match 'It was a period'. 'Visit library' needs the article 'the' before 'library'. 'Stuff' is informal; 'materials' is more appropriate.

× I don't know about Chinese gate.

✓ I don't know about Chinese kids.

The word 'gate' is incorrect here; it seems to be a mispronunciation or typo for 'kids'. Using the correct noun is essential for clarity.

× In our place where I have lived, the kids rarely visit library when in their young age, but they usually go to the library when they are in the age between 18.

✓ In the place where I have lived, kids rarely visit the library when they are young, but they usually go to the library when they are around 18 years old.

The phrase 'in our place' should be 'in the place' for correct article usage. 'Visit library' needs 'the' before 'library'. 'When in their young age' is incorrect; it should be 'when they are young'. 'In the age between 18' is awkward; 'around 18 years old' is clearer and grammatically correct.