图书馆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn chưa tự nhiên và có lỗi ngữ pháp (ví dụ: 'choose to reading' nên là 'choose to read'). Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và sử dụng cấu trúc câu đúng, tránh lặp từ và nói dài dòng.

示例: No, I don't often go to the library because I prefer reading books in my room where it's quiet and comfortable.

建议: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác (ví dụ: 'I'm really go' nên là 'I really go', 'doing' nên là 'do'). Bạn nên trả lời rõ ràng, sử dụng thì đúng và tránh lặp từ.

示例: When I go to the library, I usually do my homework and sometimes chat quietly with my friends.

建议: Câu trả lời có lỗi ngữ pháp và lặp từ (ví dụ: 'come come'). Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, dùng câu đơn giản và rõ ràng, tránh lặp từ và sắp xếp câu hợp lý.

示例: Yes, I did. My primary school had a small library, so I usually went there during break time to read books.

建议: Câu trả lời không rõ ràng, có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không phù hợp (ví dụ: 'Chinese skills' thay vì 'Chinese kids'). Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, dùng từ vựng chính xác và câu đơn giản, tránh nói lan man.

示例: From what I know, Chinese children often go to the library because they value education and have access to many books.

× Actually, I'm not a reading person, so I choose to reading books in my rooms instead of going to the library.

✓ Actually, I'm not a reading person, so I choose to read books in my room instead of going to the library.

The verb 'choose' should be followed by the base form 'to read' not the gerund 'reading'. Also, 'rooms' should be singular 'room' because it refers to the student's own room.

× I'm really go to the library, but in the library I usually doing my homework and maybe have some chat chat with my.

✓ I really go to the library, but in the library I usually do my homework and maybe have some chat with my friends.

The phrase 'I'm really go' is incorrect; it should be 'I really go' to express habitual action. 'I usually doing' should be 'I usually do' because 'usually' requires the base verb form. 'Chat chat with my' is incomplete and repetitive; it should be 'have some chat with my friends'.

× Yes of course because my primary school has a library mini library so in the at the break time I usually come come to the library to read books.

✓ Yes, of course, because my primary school had a mini library, so at break time I usually came to the library to read books.

Since the question is about the past ('when you were a kid'), past tense verbs should be used: 'has' to 'had', 'come come' is repetitive and should be 'came'. Also, 'in the at the break time' is redundant; 'at break time' is correct.

× As the Vietnamese students and what a lot of a lot of things that I have learned, I explore that Chinese skills usually go to the library because they have a large knowledge and like live in the biggest country.

✓ From what I have learned as a Vietnamese student, I find that Chinese students usually go to the library because they have a lot of knowledge and live in a big country.

The original sentence is confusing and ungrammatical. 'As the Vietnamese students and what a lot of a lot of things that I have learned' is unclear; it should be 'From what I have learned as a Vietnamese student'. 'I explore' should be 'I find'. 'Chinese skills' is incorrect; it should be 'Chinese students'. 'A large knowledge' should be 'a lot of knowledge'. 'Like live in the biggest country' is incorrect; it should be 'live in a big country'.