图书馆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer addresses the question directly and provides reasons, but it contains grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to use correct grammar, avoid repeating words like 'always', and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

示例: No, I don't often go to the library because I find it hard to concentrate there. For example, other people around me can be distracting, which makes it difficult to focus on my work.

建议: Your answer is relevant but includes filler words like 'umm' and some unclear phrases such as 'do A to complete our project assignment.' Try to be more precise and avoid fillers. Use linking words to connect your ideas and keep sentences clear and grammatically correct.

示例: When I go to the library, I usually do assignments given by my lecturer. Sometimes, I also sit with my friends to work together on our project assignments.

建议: Your answer is clear and relevant but has some grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing like 'the place that I live is kind is quite far.' Try to use correct past tense and smoother expressions. Also, use linking words to improve coherence.

示例: As far as I remember, I didn't go to the library when I was a kid because the library was quite far from where I lived.

建议: Your answer shows your opinion but includes filler words like 'umm' and some awkward phrasing such as 'they always spend their time to go to the library.' Try to avoid fillers and use more natural expressions. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

示例: I'm not sure about all Chinese kids, but I think many of them often go to the library because of the strict education system. Therefore, they spend a lot of time studying there.

× No, I don't because it's always hard for me to concentrate when I in library and I tend to always get distracted by other people around me which make it more hard for me to focus on my work.

✓ No, I don't because it's always hard for me to concentrate when I am in the library and I tend to always get distracted by other people around me which makes it harder for me to focus on my work.

The phrase 'when I in library' is missing the verb 'am' and the article 'the' before 'library'. Also, 'which make' should be 'which makes' to agree with the singular subject 'which'. The phrase 'more hard' is incorrect; 'harder' is the correct comparative form.

× If I go to the library, the only thing that I do is just umm do my assignments that my lecturer give to me and sometimes I will just sit with my friends to do A to complete our project assignment.

✓ If I go to the library, the only thing that I do is just umm do my assignments that my lecturer gives to me and sometimes I just sit with my friends to complete our project assignment.

The verb 'give' should be in the third person singular present tense 'gives' to agree with 'lecturer'. Also, 'will just sit' is better as 'just sit' to maintain present tense consistency. The phrase 'do A to complete' is unclear and corrected to 'complete' for clarity.

× As far as I remember, I don't think I used to go to the library when I was kid, because the place that I live is kind is quite far from the library.

✓ As far as I remember, I don't think I used to go to the library when I was a kid, because the place where I lived was quite far from the library.

The phrase 'when I was kid' is missing the article 'a'. Also, 'the place that I live is kind is quite far' is incorrect; it should be 'the place where I lived was quite far' to maintain past tense and correct phrasing.

× I'm not quite sure about the Chinese kids, but I think some of them often go to the library because they do have a strict umm education system, so they always spend their time to go to the library to study.

✓ I'm not quite sure about the Chinese kids, but I think some of them often go to the library because they do have a strict umm education system, so they always spend their time going to the library to study.

The phrase 'spend their time to go' is incorrect; the correct form is 'spend their time going' because 'spend time' is followed by a gerund (-ing form).