图书馆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is a bit unclear and contains some grammatical errors. Try to be more direct and concise, avoiding redundancy. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically. For example, start with a clear topic sentence, then explain your reason with linking words like 'because' or 'so'.

示例: I don't often go to the library because I have a busy college schedule. However, whenever I get free time, I make sure to visit and read books there.

建议: Your answer is repetitive and lacks clarity. Try to answer directly and avoid unnecessary repetition. Use linking words like 'and' or 'also' to connect your ideas smoothly. Provide specific details about what you do in the library.

示例: Although I rarely visit the library, when I do, I usually read books. I also spend time there with my family members who enjoy going to the library.

建议: Your answer has good content but needs better sentence structure and clarity. Use past tense correctly and avoid redundancy. Link your ideas logically using words like 'but' and 'so'.

示例: Yes, I used to go to the library with my family when I was a kid and enjoyed spending quality time there. However, now due to my busy schedule, I prefer using digital libraries to read books.

建议: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Avoid repeating phrases and incomplete sentences. Try to express your opinion clearly and support it with reasons. Use linking words like 'because' and 'also' to connect ideas.

示例: I am not sure about Chinese kids, but I believe they often go to libraries because they value education. Also, with advanced technology in China, many children use digital resources for learning.

× Umm to be very honest, I don't prefer libraries because I have business schedule so have I have to go to the college all day so that's why I do not have any time.

✓ Umm to be very honest, I don't prefer libraries because I have a business schedule so I have to go to the college all day, so that's why I do not have any time.

The sentence is missing the article 'a' before 'business schedule' which is necessary for singular countable nouns. Also, 'have I have to go' is incorrect word order; it should be 'I have to go'. This correction improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I definitely want to go to the library and read books at there.

✓ I definitely want to go to the library and read books there.

The preposition 'at' is unnecessary before 'there' because 'there' already indicates location. Using both together is redundant and incorrect.

× As I earlier mentioned that I do not prefer to go to the library, but if I talk about I will go to the library, I will read the books and apart from that I will spend the time with my kith and kins because they love to go to the library.

✓ As I mentioned earlier, I do not prefer to go to the library, but if I do go to the library, I will read books and apart from that, I will spend time with my kith and kin because they love to go to the library.

The sentence has awkward phrasing and incorrect word order. 'As I earlier mentioned that' should be 'As I mentioned earlier'. 'If I talk about I will go' is incorrect; it should be 'if I do go'. 'Spend the time' should be 'spend time'. 'Kith and kins' should be 'kith and kin' as 'kin' is already plural.

× Definitely when I was kid at that time I I go to the library with my family members and spend quality time there.

✓ Definitely, when I was a kid at that time, I went to the library with my family members and spent quality time there.

The sentence incorrectly uses present tense verbs 'go' and 'spend' when referring to past events. The correct past tense forms 'went' and 'spent' should be used. Also, 'was kid' should be 'was a kid' with the article 'a'.

× So I prefer digital libraries over go to the library and read book by myself.

✓ So I prefer digital libraries over going to the library and reading books by myself.

After 'prefer ... over', the verb should be in the gerund form. Therefore, 'go' should be 'going' and 'read' should be 'reading'. Also, 'read book' should be 'reading books' to match plural usage.

× So definitely in my childhood I go there.

✓ So definitely in my childhood I went there.

The verb 'go' is incorrectly used in present tense when referring to past time 'in my childhood'. It should be in past tense 'went'.

× I do not have enough knowledge about the Chinese people.

✓ I do not have enough knowledge about Chinese people.

The phrase 'the Chinese people' is less common here; 'Chinese people' is more natural when speaking generally about a group. The article 'the' is unnecessary.

× So I think I think so that they are more indulged toward the library books because as they as their minds are very sharp.

✓ So I think that they are more inclined towards library books because their minds are very sharp.

The sentence has redundant phrases 'I think I think so that' and awkward phrasing 'more indulged toward'. 'Inclined towards' is the correct expression. Also, 'because as they as their minds' is incorrect and simplified to 'because their minds'.

× So I think it is because they are going to the libraries and read books over there.

✓ So I think it is because they go to the libraries and read books there.

The verb tense should be consistent; 'are going' and 'read' mix present continuous and simple present incorrectly. Using simple present 'go' and 'read' is appropriate for habitual actions. Also, 'over there' can be simplified to 'there'.