图书馆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Apni answer e kichu grammar error ache, ar sentence gulo natural na. Apni proshner uttor direct dite paren, ar kichu specific details add korte paren. Linking words use koren jate answer ta logical hoy. Apni 'I go to the library a few times a week. On weekends, I usually visit the Central Library, which is the biggest in my town. It gives me a great chance to read and study in a quiet environment.' erokom bolte paren.

示例: I go to the library a few times a week. On weekends, I usually visit the Central Library, which is the biggest in my town. It gives me a great chance to read and study in a quiet environment.

建议: Apnar uttor e grammar ar sentence structure improve kora dorkar. Apni proshner uttor direct dite paren, ar supporting details clear ar specific hote hobe. Linking words use koren jate answer ta coherent hoy. Apni bolte paren, 'In the library, I usually read academic books. Besides that, I enjoy reading new comic books, which are added weekly. I also like to explore thesis books and other interesting materials.'

示例: In the library, I usually read academic books. Besides that, I enjoy reading new comic books, which are added weekly. I also like to explore thesis books and other interesting materials.

建议: Apnar uttor e grammar ar clarity improve kora dorkar. Apni proshner uttor direct ar simple sentence e dite paren. Supporting details add koren jate uttor ta bhalo hoy. Apni bolte paren, 'Yes, I often went to the library when I was a kid. My parents and siblings also used to go there with me. It was a nice place to read and learn new things.'

示例: Yes, I often went to the library when I was a kid. My parents and siblings also used to go there with me. It was a nice place to read and learn new things.

建议: Apni proshner uttor e direct ar clear hote paren. Jodi kono idea na thake, seta sohoje ar natural vabe bolte paren. Apni bolte paren, 'I am not sure if Chinese kids often go to the library because I have never visited China. So, I don't have enough information about their habits.'

示例: I am not sure if Chinese kids often go to the library because I have never visited China. So, I don't have enough information about their habits.

× Yeah, I go library very few in a week.

✓ Yeah, I go to the library very few times in a week.

The preposition 'to' is required after the verb 'go' when indicating a destination. Also, 'very few' should be followed by a countable noun like 'times' to be grammatically correct.

× On the weekend I go to Central Library towards the biggest library in our towns, in my town.

✓ On the weekend, I go to Central Library, which is the biggest library in my town.

The preposition 'towards' is incorrectly used here; instead, a relative clause 'which is' is appropriate to describe the library. Also, 'in our towns, in my town' is redundant and confusing; 'in my town' suffices.

× So it's a really good opportunity for me to go to Live Today.

✓ So it's a really good opportunity for me to go there today.

The phrase 'go to Live Today' is unclear and likely a misuse of prepositions and words. 'Go there today' is clearer and grammatically correct.

× In library, I actually read my academic books, but also very much excited for comic books.

✓ In the library, I actually read my academic books, but I am also very excited about comic books.

The definite article 'the' is needed before 'library'. Also, 'excited for' should be 'excited about' to correctly express enthusiasm towards something.

× New comic are include in my in uh, our library is, uh, weekly.

✓ New comics are included in our library weekly.

'Comic' should be plural 'comics' to agree with the plural verb 'are'. Also, 'include' should be in past participle form 'included' to form the passive voice correctly.

× It's a very fantastic for me.

✓ It's very fantastic for me.

The article 'a' is unnecessary before 'very fantastic' because 'fantastic' is an adjective that does not require an article here.

× Uh, and then I, uh, come to thesis book and so many books.

✓ Uh, and then I read thesis books and many other books.

The verb 'come to' is incorrect in this context; 'read' fits better. Also, 'thesis book' should be plural 'thesis books' to match 'so many books'.

× Yeah, obviously I go to library when I was a kid.

✓ Yeah, obviously I went to the library when I was a kid.

The past tense 'went' is required to match the past time reference 'when I was a kid'.

× My parents and my siblings are also go to library and I, I am, I am also go in library in where? Where when I was kid.

✓ My parents and my siblings also went to the library, and I also went to the library when I was a kid.

The verb form 'are also go' is incorrect; it should be past tense 'also went'. The preposition 'in' is incorrect here; 'to the library' is correct. The phrase 'in where? Where when I was kid' is unclear and should be omitted or rephrased.

× Oh, I have no idea on it. I don't know about Chinese kid, often he go to library or not because I am not visit China as well.

✓ Oh, I have no idea about it. I don't know if Chinese kids often go to the library or not because I have not visited China yet.

The preposition 'on' should be 'about'. 'Chinese kid' should be plural 'Chinese kids'. 'He go' should be 'they go' to agree in number and tense. 'I am not visit' should be 'I have not visited' for correct tense and form.

× So it's very complicated for me to talk about Chinese kid what do what not to do and that's all for me.

✓ So it's very complicated for me to talk about what Chinese kids do or do not do, and that's all from me.

The sentence structure is confusing; it needs rephrasing for clarity. 'Chinese kid what do what not to do' is incorrect; it should be 'what Chinese kids do or do not do'. 'That's all for me' is better expressed as 'that's all from me'.