图书馆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to respond directly and clearly, using correct grammar and vocabulary. Avoid redundancy and be concise. For example, say "I don't often go to the library because I prefer reading books online, which is more convenient for me."

示例: I don't often go to the library because I prefer reading books online, which is more convenient for me.

建议: Your answer is a bit repetitive and has grammatical mistakes. Try to structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details using linking words. For example, "Although I don't visit the library often, when I do, I usually read comics and business books. This helps me learn more about business studies, and sometimes I read English books to improve my language skills."

示例: Although I don't visit the library often, when I do, I usually read comics and business books. This helps me learn more about business studies, and sometimes I read English books to improve my language skills.

建议: Your answer has grammatical errors and lacks clarity. Try to answer directly and use correct verb forms. For example, "When I was a kid, I usually read my school textbooks and did not go to the library. However, I often visited my friend's house because he had many books."

示例: When I was a kid, I usually read my school textbooks and did not go to the library. However, I often visited my friend's house because he had many books.

建议: Your answer is vague and does not directly address the question. Try to give a more complete response even if you are unsure, and use linking words. For example, "I am not very familiar with Chinese culture, so I am not sure if children often go to the library there. However, I think many kids worldwide enjoy reading and visiting libraries."

示例: I am not very familiar with Chinese culture, so I am not sure if children often go to the library there. However, I think many kids worldwide enjoy reading and visiting libraries.

× I do not go to the library whenever I feel I want to read a book.

✓ I do not go to the library whenever I feel like I want to read a book.

The sentence is missing the phrase 'feel like' which is necessary to express desire or inclination in this context. Using 'feel I want' is incorrect; 'feel like I want' or simply 'feel like' is the correct modal expression.

× I search on Internet.

✓ I search on the Internet.

The noun 'Internet' requires the definite article 'the' when used in this context. Omitting 'the' before 'Internet' is incorrect.

× I can get easily whatever journey I want to read.

✓ I can easily get whatever book I want to read.

The word 'journey' is incorrectly used here; it should be 'book' to match the context. Also, the adverb 'easily' should be placed before the verb 'get' for correct adverb placement.

× As I as I said, I do not go to the library but whenever I went to library I read comics as well as sometime I read business book.

✓ As I said, I do not go to the library but whenever I go to the library, I read comics as well as sometimes I read business books.

The phrase 'As I as I said' is redundant; it should be 'As I said'. The verb tense should be present 'go' to match the habitual action. 'Sometime' should be 'sometimes' as an adverb. 'Business book' should be plural 'business books' to indicate more than one.

× It's helped me to get more more about business studies as well as sometime I read English book which helped me to improve my English reading skills.

✓ It has helped me to learn more about business studies as well as sometimes I read English books which help me to improve my English reading skills.

'It's' should be 'It has' for clarity. The phrase 'get more more' is incorrect; 'learn more' is appropriate. 'Sometime' should be 'sometimes'. 'English book' should be plural 'English books'. The verb 'helped' should be present tense 'help' to match the habitual action.

× I do not went to the library when I was kid but I went to my friend house which have many books.

✓ I did not go to the library when I was a kid but I went to my friend's house which had many books.

The auxiliary 'do' requires the base form 'go' not 'went' in negative past tense. 'When I was kid' needs the article 'a'. 'Friend house' should be possessive 'friend's house'. 'Have' should be past tense 'had' to match 'went'.

× Their kids went to library or not.

✓ Their kids go to the library or not.

'Went' is past tense but the question is about habitual action, so present tense 'go' is correct. 'Library' needs the definite article 'the'.