图书馆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Answer wa shizen de, tadashii eigo wo tsukatte kudasai. Tatoeba, 'I do not go to the library often. However, if I need to find a recommended book, I go there. Most of the time, I search online.' to iu fuu ni, motto rikai shi yasui you ni shite kudasai. Mata, fukusuu no setsumei wo suru toki wa, rensetsu-shi wo tsukatte, hanashi wo tsunagete kudasai.

示例: I don't go to the library very often. However, if I need to find a book that someone recommended, I usually visit the library. Most of the time, I prefer to search for information online because it is more convenient.

建议: Kotae wa rikai shiyasui desu ga, bunpou to eigo no seikaku-sa wo takameru hitsuyou ga arimasu. Tatoeba, 'I usually search for specific books related to my studies and read quietly. Our school library has newspapers, so I often read the sports section. I find the library peaceful and it helps me focus.' to iu fuu ni, motto seikaku ni setsumei shite kudasai.

示例: I usually look for specific books related to my studies and read quietly in the library. Our school library also has newspapers, so I often read the sports section. I find the library peaceful, which helps me concentrate better.

建议: Kotae ga sukoshi fukuzatsu de, imi ga wakari nikui desu. Motto shizen de tadashii bunshou wo tsukatte kudasai. Tatoeba, 'No, I did not often go to the library when I was a kid. My sister, who was the librarian, helped me find books recommended by my teacher.' to iu fuu ni, rikai shi yasui you ni shite kudasai.

示例: No, I did not often go to the library when I was a child. However, my sister, who worked as a librarian, helped me find books and materials recommended by my teacher.

建议: Kotae wa sukoshi fukuzatsu de, hanashi no nagare ga yoku arimasen. Motto seikaku de, rikai shi yasui bunshou wo tsukatte kudasai. Tatoeba, 'I am from Nepal, so I don't know much about Chinese students. But I think they often go to the library because they study a lot at school.' to iu fuu ni shite kudasai.

示例: I am from Nepal, so I don't have much information about Chinese students. However, I believe they often visit the library because they spend a lot of time studying at school.

× Now if there is a necessity and I need to find something that someone has recommended, I'll go to library.

✓ Now if there is a necessity and I need to find something that someone has recommended, I'll go to the library.

The sentence is missing the definite article 'the' before 'library'. In English, when referring to a specific place like 'library', the definite article 'the' is required to specify it.

× However, there in the most instance I go online and PDA online.

✓ However, in most instances, I go online and use PDA online.

The phrase 'there in the most instance' is incorrect. The correct prepositional phrase is 'in most instances' to indicate frequency. Also, 'PDA online' needs a verb 'use' to be grammatically correct.

× I do not go that often to the library.

✓ I do not go to the library that often.

The adverbial phrase 'that often' should come after the prepositional phrase 'to the library' for natural English word order.

× Our school library has newspaper so I often go and read sports section on that newspaper.

✓ Our school library has newspapers so I often go and read the sports section in those newspapers.

'Newspaper' should be plural 'newspapers' to indicate multiple copies. Also, 'sports section' needs the definite article 'the' and 'on that newspaper' should be 'in those newspapers' to match plural.

× I find a library peaceful and focus but I do.

✓ I find the library peaceful and focused, and I do.

'a library' should be 'the library' to refer to a specific place. 'focus' should be the adjective 'focused' to describe the feeling. The phrase 'but I do' is unclear; 'and I do' confirms the statement.

× No, I really went to the library when I was kid.

✓ No, I really went to the library when I was a kid.

The phrase 'when I was kid' is missing the article 'a' before 'kid' to be grammatically correct.

× I asked the librarian which was my sister to find me the books or any real any materials related and recommended by our teacher.

✓ I asked the librarian, who was my sister, to find me the books or any real materials related to and recommended by our teacher.

The relative pronoun 'which' is incorrect here; it should be 'who' to refer to a person. Also, 'any real any materials' is redundant; 'any real materials' is correct. Added 'to' after 'related' for correct prepositional use.

× I asked the librarian which was my sister to find me the books or any real any materials related and recommended by our teacher.

✓ I asked the librarian, who was my sister, to find me the books or any real materials related to and recommended by our teacher.

The phrase 'related and recommended by our teacher' requires the preposition 'to' after 'related' to be grammatically correct.

× But I never used to go.

✓ But I never used to go.

This sentence is correct as it is; 'used to' correctly expresses past habitual action.

× Since I'm from the Nepal, I have no particular idea about the science student, but I believed uh since they spend lots of time in study in school, uh, I guess they used to often go to the library for their study.

✓ Since I'm from Nepal, I have no particular idea about Chinese students, but I believe since they spend lots of time studying at school, I guess they often go to the library for their studies.

'the Nepal' should be 'Nepal' without 'the'. 'science student' is unclear; likely meant 'Chinese students'. 'believed' should be present tense 'believe' to match context. 'spend lots of time in study' should be 'spend lots of time studying'. 'in school' is better as 'at school'. 'used to often go' is awkward; 'often go' is better. 'their study' should be plural 'their studies'.