图书馆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and contains grammatical errors. Try to make your response more natural by correcting grammar and avoiding redundancy. For example, instead of saying "borrow some book" and "borrow some books in cheap price," you can say "borrow books" and mention the benefit clearly. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

示例: Yes, I often go to the library because it's a quiet place where I can study without distractions. Additionally, I can borrow books for free, which helps me save money.

建议: Your answer provides relevant content but has grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing. Use correct verb forms and clearer sentence structures. Also, use linking words like "because" or "which" to connect your ideas logically.

示例: I usually read books that are not available in stationery or bookshops because the library has various resources. These materials help me gather information and generate innovative ideas for my projects.

建议: Your answer has tense inconsistencies and unclear expressions. Use past tense consistently when talking about the past. Also, clarify your ideas and avoid vague phrases like "play something". Use linking words to improve coherence.

示例: Yes, I always went to the library when I was a child. When I was in first grade, my teachers often took us there to play educational games and taught us children's rhymes.

建议: Your answer is unclear and contains irrelevant information. Focus directly on the question and provide a clear opinion or fact. Avoid unrelated statements like "I didn't know too much information about design." Use linking words to organize your answer logically.

示例: I'm not sure about the exact frequency, but many Chinese kids do go to the library. It's a quiet place where they can read and find resources that help them learn and come up with new ideas.

× I prefer to go to the library often because I want to borrow some book and library is the place where we can study without and distraction.

✓ I prefer to go to the library often because I want to borrow some books and the library is the place where we can study without any distraction.

The word 'book' should be plural 'books' because 'some' indicates more than one. Also, 'library' needs the definite article 'the' because it refers to a specific place. 'and distraction' is missing 'any' to correctly express absence of distraction.

× We can borrow some books in cheap price.

✓ We can borrow some books at a cheap price.

The phrase 'in cheap price' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'at' and it requires the article 'a' before 'cheap price'.

× I usually read the books that cannot find in stationery or book shops.

✓ I usually read books that cannot be found in stationery or book shops.

'The books' is unnecessarily specific; 'books' is better here. Also, 'cannot find' is missing the passive form 'be found' to be grammatically correct.

× In library, we can found different types of resource materials that helps to get different information about our project work.

✓ In the library, we can find different types of resource materials that help us get different information about our project work.

'In library' needs the definite article 'the'. 'found' should be 'find' to match present tense. 'helps' should be 'help' to agree with plural subject 'materials'. Also, 'helps to get' is better as 'help us get' for clarity.

× Yes, I always go to the library when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I always went to the library when I was a child.

The action happened in the past, so 'go' should be in past tense 'went' to match 'was'.

× When I read in class one, my teachers always take us here in library to play something and they teach us rhyme in the library about children's.

✓ When I was in class one, my teachers always took us to the library to play games and they taught us rhymes about children in the library.

'When I read in class one' is incorrect; it should be 'When I was in class one'. 'take us here in library' should be 'took us to the library'. 'play something' is vague; 'play games' is clearer. 'teach us rhyme' should be 'taught us rhymes'. 'about children's' is incorrect; it should be 'about children'.

× Kids go often to the library, but library is the place where anyone can go and read silently and peacefully, where we can get lost of references and resources that help us to generate more ideas.

✓ Kids often go to the library, but the library is a place where anyone can go and read silently and peacefully, where we can get lots of references and resources that help us generate more ideas.

'Go often' is better as 'often go'. 'library' needs the definite article 'the'. 'get lost of references' is incorrect; it should be 'get lots of references'. 'help us to generate' can be simplified to 'help us generate'.