图书馆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and has grammatical errors. Try to avoid repeating the same idea and use clearer sentence structures. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

示例: Yes, I often go to the library because it is a quiet place where I can concentrate better than at home. Moreover, the peaceful environment helps me focus on my studies effectively.

建议: Your answer is unclear and contains many grammatical mistakes. Try to organize your ideas logically and use correct verb forms. Also, explain clearly what activities you do in the library.

示例: In the library, I usually study by making notes and solving difficult problems. Sometimes, I discuss these problems with my friends to understand them better.

建议: Your answer is too long and confusing with many pauses and errors. Try to make a clear and concise response with correct tenses and sentence structure.

示例: No, I did not go to the library when I was a child because I was not familiar with it. However, as I grew older, I became interested in visiting libraries to study.

建议: Your answer is unclear and has grammatical mistakes. Try to use proper sentence structure and explain your ideas more clearly with linking words.

示例: Yes, Chinese kids often visit libraries because they want to learn new things. Additionally, when they face difficulties in their studies, they use the library resources to solve their problems.

× I often go to the library there, it's very quiet place and I I think I can concentrate on my study in library, not in my home.

✓ I often go to the library there, it's a very quiet place and I think I can concentrate on my study in the library, not at my home.

The definite article 'the' is needed before 'library' when referring to a specific place already mentioned or known. Also, 'a' is required before 'very quiet place' because it is a singular countable noun. 'At' is more appropriate than 'in' when referring to 'my home'.

× And it's a very quiet place that helps me to concentrate on my study much more.

✓ And it's a very quiet place that helps me concentrate on my studies much more.

The phrase 'concentrate on my study' should be 'concentrate on my studies' because 'studies' is the correct plural form when referring to academic work in general.

× In library I always do I'm my studies thing like I make I may from my home.

✓ In the library, I always do my study things like making notes from my home.

The sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. 'In library' needs 'the'. 'I'm my studies thing' is incorrect; it should be 'my study things'. 'I make I may from my home' is unclear; likely intended 'making notes from my home'.

× I make some note and I solve their communicate with my friends and solve some different types of problem which was very difficult for me.

✓ I make some notes and communicate with my friends to solve different types of problems which were very difficult for me.

'Note' should be plural 'notes'. 'Solve their communicate' is incorrect; it should be 'communicate with my friends'. 'Problem' should be plural 'problems'. 'Was' should be 'were' to agree with plural 'problems'.

× I did not go any library umm because I was not so well known about library and I don't even know how what is the environment of a library.

✓ I did not go to any library because I was not well known about libraries and I didn't even know what the environment of a library was.

'Go any library' needs 'go to any library'. 'Was not so well known about library' should be 'was not well known about libraries'. 'Don't even know' should be past tense 'didn't even know'. The question word order 'how what is' is incorrect; it should be 'what the environment was'.

× But when I am become an adult then I trying to uh then I am trying to know about library and what?

✓ But when I became an adult, I started trying to learn about the library and what it is.

'Am become' is incorrect; past tense 'became' is needed. 'I trying' should be 'I started trying' or 'I am trying'. The sentence is incomplete and unclear; it needs to be completed for clarity.

× Yeah, definitely Chinese kids are often go visit in library because, uh, they are always trying to find out new thing and I think they are going through some rules and regulation.

✓ Yeah, definitely Chinese kids often go to the library because they are always trying to find out new things and I think they are going through some rules and regulations.

'Are often go visit in library' is incorrect; correct form is 'often go to the library'. 'New thing' should be plural 'new things'. 'Rules and regulation' should be plural 'rules and regulations'.

× So there are lot of problem in their studies. So they solve in library. I definitely.

✓ So there are a lot of problems in their studies, so they solve them in the library, definitely.

'Lot of problem' needs 'a lot of problems'. 'Solve in library' is incomplete; it should be 'solve them in the library'. The sentence 'I definitely.' is incomplete and should be connected properly.