图书馆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên nhưng có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ chưa chính xác, ví dụ như 'for where I lived' nên là 'where I live' hoặc 'where I lived before'. Bạn cũng nên tránh lặp lại từ 'I do' và nên dùng câu ngắn gọn, rõ ràng hơn. Hãy thêm liên từ để câu mạch lạc hơn.

示例: No, I don't often go to the library because there aren't many libraries where I live. However, I enjoy reading books about science and social economics in my free time.

建议: Bạn trả lời khá đầy đủ nhưng câu hơi dài và có lỗi ngữ pháp như 'read book' nên là 'read books', 'tend to be' nên là 'tends to be'. Bạn nên dùng liên từ như 'and' hoặc 'so' để câu mạch lạc hơn và tránh câu bắt đầu bằng 'Because'.

示例: I usually go to the library to study and read books. I also bring my laptop to do homework because the quiet environment helps me focus better.

建议: Bạn nên chú ý đến cách dùng danh từ số nhiều và mạo từ, ví dụ 'a lot libraries' nên là 'a lot of libraries'. Câu cuối 'It's free' hơi thừa và không cần thiết. Hãy dùng câu ngắn gọn, tránh lặp từ và dùng liên từ để câu mạch lạc hơn.

示例: No, I didn't go to the library much because there weren't many libraries where I lived. However, I often visited bookstores to read books for free.

建议: Bạn cần chú ý ngữ pháp số nhiều, ví dụ 'Chinese kids goes' nên là 'Chinese kids go'. Câu 'focus on their educations' nên là 'focus on their education'. Câu cuối nên dùng thì hiện tại đơn để nói về thói quen. Hãy dùng liên từ để câu mạch lạc hơn và tránh lặp từ.

示例: Yes, I think Chinese kids often go to the library to study because their parents want them to focus on their education. As a result, they usually get high scores in class.

× No I don't because there aren't many libraries for where I lived.

✓ No I don't because there weren't many libraries where I lived.

The sentence refers to a past situation ('where I lived'), so the verb 'be' should be in the past tense 'weren't' instead of the present tense 'aren't'.

× No I don't because there aren't many libraries for where I lived.

✓ No I don't because there weren't many libraries where I lived.

The preposition 'for' is incorrectly used here. The correct preposition is omitted; it should be 'libraries where I lived' to indicate location.

× I tend to read books about science and social economic.

✓ I tend to read books about science and socioeconomics.

The phrase 'social economic' is incorrect. The correct term is 'socioeconomics' which is a noun referring to social and economic factors.

× not only to read book, I can also bring my laptop and do my homework in the library.

✓ not only to read books, I can also bring my laptop and do my homework in the library.

The word 'book' should be plural 'books' because it refers to reading in general, which is countable and plural here.

× Because the environment in the library tend to be very quiet, it's helped me to focus on my task.

✓ Because the environment in the library tends to be very quiet, it helps me to focus on my task.

The subject 'environment' is singular, so the verb should be 'tends' not 'tend'. Also, 'it's helped' is past tense but the context suggests a general truth, so 'it helps' is more appropriate.

× As I mentioned before, there aren't a lot libraries where I lived, so no.

✓ As I mentioned before, there weren't a lot of libraries where I lived, so no.

The phrase 'aren't a lot libraries' is incorrect. It should be 'weren't a lot of libraries' to match past tense and correct article usage.

× Chinese kids goes to the library to study because their parents want them to focus on their educations.

✓ Chinese kids go to the library to study because their parents want them to focus on their education.

The plural subject 'kids' requires the plural verb 'go' not 'goes'. Also, 'educations' should be singular 'education' as it is an uncountable noun here.