图书馆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Try to make your answer more concise and natural by avoiding repetition and incomplete sentences. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and complete your thoughts clearly.

示例: Yes, I go to the library every weekend because I enjoy reading and the quiet environment helps me focus. Seeing others studying motivates me to concentrate better.

建议: Avoid incomplete sentences and unclear phrases. Use linking words to connect your ideas and provide specific details about your activities in the library.

示例: Usually, I go to the library to read new books. For example, I am currently learning French, so I borrow French language books to help me study.

建议: Make your sentences complete and clear. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide specific details about your experience with libraries as a child.

示例: When I was a kid, I used to visit my school's library regularly because there was no public library in my hometown. I especially enjoyed reading poetry books there.

建议: Try to express your opinion more clearly and use linking words to connect your ideas. Provide specific reasons or examples to support your answer.

示例: I think Chinese kids often visit libraries during school hours because schools encourage reading. However, outside of school, they may not visit libraries as frequently due to limited access or other activities.

× Yes, I go to the library on every weekend and I love to read books and I love the environment.

✓ Yes, I go to the library every weekend and I love to read books and I love the environment.

The preposition 'on' is not used with 'every weekend'. The correct phrase is 'every weekend' without 'on'.

× When I'm there, I can be more focused because everybody that I see around myself is learning something or see them reading books.

✓ When I'm there, I can be more focused because everybody I see around me is learning something or reading books.

The reflexive pronoun 'myself' is incorrectly used here; 'me' is the correct object pronoun. Also, 'see them reading books' is awkward; it should be 'reading books' to parallel the previous clause.

× So that is the environment that.

✓ So that is the environment.

The sentence is incomplete and ends abruptly. Removing 'that' completes the sentence properly.

× Usually I go there to read new books and sometimes I just like to learn new languages.

✓ Usually I go there to read new books and sometimes I just like learning new languages.

After 'like', the gerund form ('learning') is preferred when expressing enjoyment of an activity.

× Like currently I'm learning French, so I just go there and get a book which is related to French and so I can start or I can learn French from that book other than.

✓ Currently, I'm learning French, so I just go there and get a book related to French so I can start learning or learn French from that book.

The phrase 'which is related to French' is better as 'related to French'. Also, 'other than' is unnecessary and makes the sentence incomplete; it should be removed. The sentence is restructured for clarity.

× I used to go to the library when in my school when I was a kid, but other than that there was no any Public Library in my hometown so I never visited any other library except my school's library.

✓ I used to go to the library when I was in school as a kid, but other than that, there was no public library in my hometown, so I never visited any other library except my school's library.

The phrase 'when in my school' is incorrect; it should be 'when I was in school'. 'No any' is incorrect; use 'no' or 'any' but not both. 'Public Library' should not be capitalized unless it's a proper noun.

× Used to read the poem books and yeah.

✓ I used to read poetry books, and yeah.

The sentence lacks a subject; adding 'I' corrects this. 'Poem books' is awkward; 'poetry books' is the correct term.

× I believe kids get a chance to go to the library when they are in the school.

✓ I believe kids get a chance to go to the library when they are in school.

The article 'the' is unnecessary before 'school' when speaking generally about attending school.

× OK, When they're not in the school, I don't think that they usually visit the libraries.

✓ OK, when they're not in school, I don't think they usually visit libraries.

Again, 'the' before 'school' is unnecessary. Also, 'the libraries' is better as 'libraries' when speaking generally.