图书馆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答は自然ですが、文法の誤りと冗長な表現があります。例えば、「library」は単数形の前に冠詞が必要です。また、「It's kinda impossible to me」は不自然なので、具体的な理由を明確に述べると良いでしょう。

示例: I don't often go to the library because there are only a few in my city, and they close early at 8:00 PM, which makes it difficult for me to visit.

建议: 回答は内容が豊富ですが、文法の誤りとつながりの弱さがあります。例えば、「a lot of book」は「a lot of books」が正しいです。また、接続詞を使って文をつなげるとより自然になります。

示例: The last time I went to the library, I read many books. It is a very big library with a variety of books, and I usually read imported English books because English is not my first language, so these books are quite rare to find.

建议: 回答は意味が伝わりますが、文法と語彙の誤りが多いです。「library」は単数形の前に冠詞が必要で、「not that many」は「not many libraries」が正しいです。より明確で簡潔な表現を心がけましょう。

示例: I don't really remember going to the library when I was a kid because there were not many libraries in my area. I only used the school library, not public libraries.

建议: 回答は質問に直接答えていません。また、文法の誤りと不自然な表現があります。質問に対して明確に答え、理由や具体例を付け加えると良いでしょう。

示例: I'm not sure if Chinese kids often go to the library because I don't go there much myself. However, some of my Chinese friends visit the library frequently since it is close to their homes.

× I don't really go to library that much.

✓ I don't really go to the library that much.

The noun 'library' is a singular countable noun and requires a definite article 'the' when referring to a specific place known to both speaker and listener. Omitting 'the' here is incorrect.

× In my city there are only few library and it restricts it's opening time to 8:00 PM only.

✓ In my city there are only a few libraries and they restrict their opening time to 8:00 PM only.

'Library' should be plural 'libraries' because 'few' refers to plural nouns. Also, 'it's' is a contraction of 'it is' and should be replaced with the possessive pronoun 'its'. The subject 'libraries' is plural, so the verb should be 'restrict' and pronoun 'they'.

× and it restricts it's opening time to 8:00 PM only.

✓ and they restrict their opening time to 8:00 PM only.

'It's' is a contraction for 'it is' or 'it has' and is incorrect here. The possessive pronoun 'its' should be used. Also, since the subject is plural 'libraries', the pronoun should be 'they' and possessive 'their'.

× It's kinda impossible to me.

✓ It's kinda impossible for me.

The correct preposition after 'impossible' when referring to a person is 'for', not 'to'.

× The last time I went to the library I read a lot of book and it is a very big library with variety of books.

✓ The last time I went to the library I read a lot of books and it is a very big library with a variety of books.

'Book' should be plural 'books' because 'a lot of' refers to plural countable nouns. Also, 'variety' as a singular noun requires the article 'a' before it.

× I usually read the imported books with English language because English is not my first language so it's kind of rare to see them.

✓ I usually read the imported books in English because English is not my first language so it's kind of rare to see them.

'With English language' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'in' when referring to the language of the books.

× I don't really remember going to library when I was a kid because then again the library in my setting is not that many, so I only go to school library, not for Public Library or any library.

✓ I don't really remember going to the library when I was a kid because, then again, the libraries in my area are not that many, so I only went to the school library, not the public library or any other library.

'Going to library' requires the article 'the' before 'library'. 'Library' should be plural 'libraries' to match 'not that many'. 'In my setting' is awkward; 'in my area' is better. 'I only go' should be past tense 'I only went' to match 'when I was a kid'. 'Not for Public Library' is incorrect; it should be 'not the public library'. Also, 'any library' is better as 'any other library' for clarity.

× so I only go to school library, not for Public Library or any library.

✓ so I only went to the school library, not the public library or any other library.

The sentence refers to past time ('when I was a kid'), so the verb should be in past tense 'went' instead of present tense 'go'.

× I don't really know do Chinese kids go to the library?

✓ I don't really know if Chinese kids go to the library.

The sentence is a statement, not a question, so 'do' should be removed and replaced with 'if' to form an indirect question.

× But my Chinese friends go to library a lot because it's near their house specifically.

✓ But my Chinese friends go to the library a lot because it's near their house specifically.

'Go to library' requires the definite article 'the' before 'library'.