图书馆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Cevabınız doğal ve anlamlı ancak bazı dilbilgisi hataları ve gereksiz tekrarlar var. "to library" yerine "to the library" demelisiniz. Ayrıca "it's sharpens my skills" ifadesi yanlış, "it sharpens my skills" olmalı. Daha akıcı ve doğal cümleler kurmaya çalışın.

示例: Yes, I often go to the library to read about new topics and expand my knowledge. It also helps me sharpen my skills. Therefore, visiting the library is not just an activity but an important way to improve myself.

建议: Cümleniz anlamlı ancak dilbilgisi ve kelime kullanımı açısından geliştirilmesi gerekiyor. "there is some computer room in library at there" ifadesi yanlış ve kafa karıştırıcı. "I use library as a studying field" yerine "I use the library as a quiet place to study" demelisiniz. Bağlaçları daha etkili kullanmaya çalışın.

示例: I usually read books from various genres. Also, the library has a computer room where I can continue my research online. Moreover, I use the library as a quiet place to study because there are plenty of rooms to sit and read.

建议: Cümleniz genel olarak iyi ancak "any library near to our house" yerine "any libraries near our house" demelisiniz. Ayrıca "to for me" ifadesi hatalı. Daha akıcı ve doğal ifadeler kullanmaya özen gösterin.

示例: When I was a kid, there weren't any libraries near our house, so it was not possible for me to visit one. However, I expanded my knowledge by reading ebooks and watching television documentaries.

建议: Cümlenizde bazı dilbilgisi hataları ve gereksiz tekrarlar var. "go to library" yerine "go to the library" demelisiniz. "reach to social media" ifadesi yanlış, "access social media" daha doğru olur. Ayrıca "already great source" ifadesinde "are" eksik.

示例: Well, I believe that they don't go to the library that often anymore because they have many other resources now. For instance, they can access social media and many mobile applications. So, these digital platforms are already great sources of information.

× Yes, I often go to library to read about new topics to extend my knowledge.

✓ Yes, I often go to the library to read about new topics to extend my knowledge.

The noun 'library' is a singular countable noun and requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific place known to both speaker and listener. Omitting 'the' before 'library' is incorrect in this context.

× Also it's sharpens my skills.

✓ Also, it sharpens my skills.

The contraction 'it's' stands for 'it is' or 'it has', which is incorrect here. The correct subject pronoun 'it' should be used without the auxiliary verb 'is' before the main verb 'sharpens'.

× Therefore, going to a library is not only an activity, it's also an important tool, uh, to improve yourself.

✓ Therefore, going to the library is not only an activity, it's also an important tool, uh, to improve yourself.

When referring to a specific place or concept already mentioned or known, the definite article 'the' should be used instead of the indefinite article 'a'.

× I read books from many different genres. Also there is some computer room in library at there I can continue my research at WAP.

✓ I read books from many different genres. Also, there is a computer room in the library where I can continue my research at WAP.

'Some computer room' is incorrect; 'a computer room' is appropriate for singular countable nouns. Also, 'in library' requires the definite article 'the' as it refers to a specific place. The phrase 'at there' is incorrect; 'where' is the correct relative adverb to connect the clauses.

× Also I use library as a studying field that is quiet and there are plenty of rooms to sit and read.

✓ Also, I use the library as a study area that is quiet and has plenty of rooms to sit and read.

'Library' requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific place. 'Studying field' is an unnatural collocation; 'study area' is more appropriate. Additionally, 'that is quiet and there are plenty of rooms' is better expressed as 'that is quiet and has plenty of rooms' for clarity and conciseness.

× When I was a kid, there weren't any library near to our house.

✓ When I was a kid, there weren't any libraries near our house.

'Library' is a countable noun and should be pluralized as 'libraries' when used with 'any' in negative sentences. Also, 'near to' is incorrect; 'near' does not require 'to'.

× Therefore it was not possible to for me to visit the library.

✓ Therefore, it was not possible for me to visit the library.

The phrase 'to for me' is incorrect; only 'for me' is needed after 'possible'. The preposition 'to' before 'for me' is unnecessary and incorrect.

× Well, I believe that, uh, they don't go to library that often anymore because, uh, they have many other resources now.

✓ Well, I believe that, uh, they don't go to the library that often anymore because, uh, they have many other resources now.

'Library' is a singular countable noun and requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific place or concept known to both speaker and listener.

× For instance, they can reach to social media, uh, many mobile applications.

✓ For instance, they can access social media, uh, and many mobile applications.

The verb 'reach' is not correctly used with 'to' in this context. The correct verb is 'access' without 'to'. Also, 'and' is needed to connect 'social media' and 'many mobile applications' properly.

× So these digital platforms already great source of information.

✓ So these digital platforms are already a great source of information.

The sentence lacks the verb 'are' which is necessary to link the subject and the complement. Also, the article 'a' is needed before 'great source' as it is a singular countable noun phrase.