图书馆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to use correct tense and structure, and avoid repetition. For example, say "I used to go to the library when I was a student, but after graduation, I have been too busy looking for a job, so I don't have time to go anymore."

示例: I used to go to the library regularly when I was a student. However, after graduating, I became very busy searching for a job, so I haven't had much time to visit the library lately.

建议: Your answer is unclear and lacks coherence. Try to organize your ideas logically and use linking words. Also, avoid filler words and repetition. For example, say "I usually go to the library to borrow different kinds of books and read them quietly because I prefer not to buy many books."

示例: I usually go to the library to borrow various books and read them quietly. I prefer this because I don't want to buy too many books and the library provides a peaceful environment for reading.

建议: Your answer is generally good but can be improved by using more natural expressions and clearer sentence structure. For example, say "Yes, I have many childhood memories of the library because I often went there in my free time to read cartoons and storybooks. It was my favorite place."

示例: Yes, I have many childhood memories of the library. I often spent my free time there reading cartoons and storybooks, which made it my favorite place.

建议: Your answer is incomplete and unclear. Try to complete your thoughts and use linking words to connect ideas. For example, say "I think it depends because nowadays, many children use phones, laptops, and the Internet to get information. However, some still go to the library to read books or study."

示例: I think it depends. Nowadays, many children use phones, laptops, and the Internet to find information. However, some still prefer to go to the library to read books or study in a quiet environment.

× Yes, I used to. I used to go to the library when I I am a student when I was a student, but after graduate I am too busy to find a job so there is no time to go to the library.

✓ Yes, I used to. I used to go to the library when I was a student, but after graduating I was too busy finding a job so there was no time to go to the library.

The sentence mixes present and past tenses incorrectly. 'I am a student' should be 'I was a student' to match the past context. 'After graduate' should be 'after graduating' to use the correct verb form. 'I am too busy to find a job' should be 'I was too busy finding a job' to maintain past tense consistency.

× but after graduate I am too busy to find a job so there is no time to go to the library.

✓ but after graduating I was too busy finding a job so there was no time to go to the library.

The phrase 'after graduate' is incorrect; it should be 'after graduating' to correctly use the gerund form after 'after'. Also, 'too busy to find a job' is better expressed as 'too busy finding a job' to indicate ongoing activity.

× Uh, I'm about 1, you know, book book 1.

✓ Uh, I have about one book, you know, just one book.

The phrase 'I'm about 1' is unclear and incorrect. It should be 'I have about one book' to correctly express possession and quantity. Also, 'book book 1' is redundant and unclear; simplifying to 'just one book' improves clarity.

× So I used to go to the library to borrow, to borrow different kind of books and, and read them and quietly like library.

✓ So I used to go to the library to borrow different kinds of books and read them quietly because I like the library.

'Different kind of books' should be 'different kinds of books' to match plural form. The sentence structure is awkward; adding 'because I like the library' clarifies the meaning. Also, 'and quietly like library' is incorrect and needs rephrasing.

× And I don't want to buy, uh, bulk news, so I'm there.

✓ And I don't want to buy many books, so I go there.

'Bulk news' is unclear and likely incorrect. It should be 'many books' or 'a lot of books'. Also, 'so I'm there' is vague; 'so I go there' clearly indicates the action.

× Ah yes, in my childhood memory there are a lot of memory about the library because in my free time I I usually went to the library and read a book like cartoon and storybook in the library.

✓ Ah yes, in my childhood memories there are a lot of memories about the library because in my free time I usually went to the library and read books like cartoons and storybooks.

'Memory' should be plural 'memories' to match 'a lot of'. Also, 'a book like cartoon and storybook' should be 'books like cartoons and storybooks' to correctly use plural forms and articles.

× Do Chinese kids often go to the library? I think it depends because uh non day like everything can be fine on phones and laptop and Internet.

✓ I think it depends because nowadays everything can be done on phones, laptops, and the Internet.

'Non day' is incorrect; it should be 'nowadays'. Also, 'everything can be fine on phones and laptop and Internet' is awkward; 'everything can be done on phones, laptops, and the Internet' is clearer and grammatically correct.

× So going to library to read a book or to study is OK but but do you want to get information like that that you can search and.

✓ So going to the library to read a book or to study is okay, but if you want to get information, you can search for it online.

The sentence is incomplete and has repetition ('but but'). Adding 'if you want to get information, you can search for it online' completes the thought and improves clarity. Also, 'going to library' should be 'going to the library'.