图书馆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 你嘅答案有啲語法錯誤同埋用詞唔夠自然，例如「in my lesser time」應該講「in my free time」；另外，句子有啲冗長同重複，可以簡化同清晰啲表達。建議你用更自然嘅連接詞同埋簡潔嘅句子結構。

示例: Yes, I often go to the library on weekends. In my free time, I enjoy reading books there because it is quiet and peaceful. Also, the library has a study room where I can prepare for my exams.

建议: 你嘅答案表達有啲唔自然，例如「books which I'm favored with」應該講「books that I like」；另外，句子結構可以更流暢，使用連接詞令內容更連貫。

示例: I usually read books that I like in the library. Sometimes, I search for books on the library's website before going. Other times, I browse the bookshelves to find interesting titles by their names.

建议: 你嘅答案有語法錯誤同埋表達唔清楚，例如「both we just engaging and have interesting book titles to do」唔明確。建議你用簡單清晰嘅句子，並且用連接詞令內容更有邏輯。

示例: Yes, I went to the library when I was a child. During long holidays like summer and Christmas, I had to do book reports. So, I often went to the library to find interesting books to read and write about.

建议: 你嘅答案有語法錯誤，例如「Chinese kids likes」應該係「Chinese kids like」；句子結構唔完整，最後一句「So I think Chinese try like」唔通順。建議你用完整句子，並且用連接詞令答案更流暢。

示例: Generally, Chinese kids like going to the library. There are many books that they find interesting, including some from other countries that they may not be familiar with. Therefore, I think many Chinese children enjoy visiting libraries.

× Yes, I go to library every week during weekend.

✓ Yes, I go to the library every weekend.

喺英文入面，當講到特定嘅地方，例如圖書館，通常要用定冠詞'the'。另外，'during weekend'唔正確，應該用'every weekend'嚟表示每個周末。

× In my lesser time, I enjoy reading books in the quiet places especially in library which we do not need to speak to our friends.

✓ In my free time, I enjoy reading books in quiet places, especially in the library where we do not need to speak to our friends.

'Lesser time'唔係正確嘅表達，應該用'free time'表示空閒時間。'In the quiet places'前面唔需要用定冠詞，因為係泛指。'In library'要加定冠詞'the library'。'Which'用喺限定性定語從句時，應該用'where'嚟指地方。

× Also, there is a study room in the library for me to prepare for my examinations and also tests.

✓ Also, there is a study room in the library for me to prepare for my examinations and tests.

句子中'and also tests'中'also'重複使用，應該刪除其中一個以避免冗餘。

× I usually read books which I'm favored with in the library.

✓ I usually read books which I favor in the library.

'I'm favored with'係被動語態，唔適合呢度嘅意思。應該用主動語態'I favor'表示我喜歡嘅書。

× Sometimes I will first search the books I would like to read through the website of the library, and sometimes I would just go to the bookshelves to find whatever I like through the book's name.

✓ Sometimes I first search for the books I would like to read through the library's website, and sometimes I just go to the bookshelves to find whatever I like by the book's name.

'Search'後面要用介詞'for'。'Website of the library'更自然嘅表達係'the library's website'。'Through the book's name'唔正確，應該用'by the book's name'表示根據書名。

× In my childhood I always need to do book reports during the long holiday like summer holiday and Christmas holiday.

✓ In my childhood, I always needed to do book reports during long holidays like summer holiday and Christmas holiday.

描述過去習慣時，動詞要用過去式'needed'。'During the long holiday'應該用複數'holidays'因為有多個假期。

× Therefore, when I have the homework, I will just go to library and find both we just engaging and have interesting book titles to do.

✓ Therefore, when I have homework, I will just go to the library and find books that are engaging and have interesting titles to read.

'Homework'係不可數名詞，前面唔需要定冠詞'the'。'Go to library'要加定冠詞'the library'。句子結構混亂，需重組使意思清晰。

× Generally Chinese kids likes going to the library.

✓ Generally, Chinese kids like going to the library.

主語'kids'係複數，動詞要用複數形式'like'。

× There are many books which Chinese kids may find interesting and some books may not be familiar with them because there are a lot of books from different countries.

✓ There are many books which Chinese kids may find interesting, and some books may not be familiar to them because there are a lot of books from different countries.

'Be familiar with'後面嘅對象係人，'be familiar to'後面嘅對象係事物，所以應該用'be familiar to them'。

× So I think Chinese try like.

✓ So I think Chinese kids try to like them.

句子結構不完整，缺少動詞和賓語，應補充完整使句子通順。