图书馆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Keep the answer concise and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons. Fix verb forms and avoid repetition. Use linking words such as 'but' or 'however' correctly and limit to under five sentences.

示例: I don't go to the library very often, but recently I started visiting more because I want to improve my skills and knowledge. For example, I now borrow study guides and use quiet study areas to focus on exam preparation.

建议: Answer directly with clear activities and reduce hesitation. Use correct verbs and article usage ('borrow' vs 'use the printer'). Combine related activities with a linking phrase like 'in addition' and give one specific example.

示例: I usually read romance novels in the library and, in addition, I use the printer there to print essays or study materials. For instance, last week I printed an assignment I had to hand in.

建议: Be honest but concise, avoid awkward phrasing and double negatives. Use correct past-tense forms and a brief reason. If possible, add a short detail about why or how that changed later.

示例: No, I didn't go to the library much as a child because I wasn't interested in reading. Later, as I grew older, I became more curious and started visiting the library to study.

建议: Avoid absolute words like 'always' unless you are certain. Use clearer subject-verb agreement and more natural reasons. Give a specific example or qualification (e.g., many students visit due to school programs).

示例: Many Chinese children do visit libraries because schools and local authorities encourage reading through programs and homework requirements. For example, primary schools often organize library visits as part of the curriculum.

× Actually I don't often go to the library because I found it boring, but recently I have start, I have start to go to the library to explore more and more to improve my skill and knowledge.

✓ Actually I don't often go to the library because I find it boring, but recently I have started to go to the library to explore more and to improve my skills and knowledge.

Mixed and incorrect verb tenses: 'found' is past but context is general habit so use present 'find'; 'have start' is incorrect past participle — use 'have started'. Also pluralize 'skill' to 'skills' for natural phrasing and remove repetitive 'more and more'. Suggestion: keep present tense for general opinions and present perfect for recent changes: 'I find' and 'I have started'.

× Well, umm, well, I formally go to the library to read some romance books and uh, additionally, umm, I also use borrow this uh, print machine to print some paper.

✓ Well, I normally go to the library to read some romance books and, additionally, I also use the printer to print papers.

Incorrect word choices and verb forms: 'formally' is wrong adverb — 'normally' fits habitual action. 'use borrow' is an incorrect combination; choose either 'use' or 'borrow'; here 'use the printer' is appropriate. 'print machine' is nonstandard — use 'printer'. 'print some paper' should be 'print papers' or 'print some papers'. Suggestion: use correct collocations: 'normally', 'use the printer', 'print papers'.

× Actually, I'm not umm, I didn't go to the library because because umm, I myself is, is the person who never, who never read any books in life.

✓ Actually, I didn't go to the library because I was the person who never read any books.

Mixed tense and subject-verb agreement errors: 'I'm not' conflicts with past 'didn't go'; maintain past tense 'I didn't go'. 'I myself is' is incorrect — use past 'I was'. 'Who never read any books in life' is wordy; 'who never read any books' conveys the meaning. Suggestion: keep consistent past tense for childhood habits: 'I didn't go... because I was the person who never read any books.'

× Oh, frankly speaking, I think Chinese kids always go to the library because the authority are promoting promoting students to increase the their IQ and EQ rate.

✓ Oh, frankly speaking, I think Chinese kids often go to the library because the authorities are encouraging students to improve their IQ and EQ.

Several issues: 'always go' is too absolute — use 'often' unless sure. 'the authority are' is subject-verb agreement and number: use plural 'authorities are' or singular 'the authority is'. 'promoting promoting' is repeated. 'to increase the their IQ and EQ rate' has article error and unnatural phrasing — remove extra 'the' and 'rate', use 'improve their IQ and EQ'. Suggestion: use 'often', correct plural noun and verb agreement, avoid repetitions, and phrase 'improve their IQ and EQ'.