鞋子— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答が不自然で文法的な誤りが多いです。質問に直接答え、頻度を明確に述べる必要があります。また、冗長な表現を避け、簡潔に答えましょう。

示例: I don't like buying shoes very often because I usually use the same pair for a long time, sometimes for two years or more.

建议: 文法と語順の誤りが多く、意味が伝わりにくいです。オンライン購入の経験を簡潔に述べ、問題点を明確に説明しましょう。

示例: Yes, I have bought Adidas shoes online because I liked the design, but unfortunately, they were too big for me and I couldn't exchange them.

建议: 時制の誤りと不明瞭な表現があります。普段の支出について現在形で答え、具体的な理由や例を明確に述べましょう。

示例: I usually spend a lot of money on shoes because expensive ones last longer. For example, cheap shoes I bought before got dirty quickly.

建议: 意味が不明瞭で文法的な誤りが多いです。好みをはっきり述べ、その理由を具体的に説明しましょう。

示例: I prefer fashionable shoes because they make me feel confident and motivated when I go out shopping or to college.

× I don't like to buy the shoes I my shoes have got for two years ago.

✓ I don't like to buy the shoes I got two years ago.

The phrase 'I my shoes have got for two years ago' is incorrect. The pronoun 'my' is unnecessary and the verb tense is wrong. The correct form is 'I got two years ago' to indicate past possession. Remove 'my shoes have' to correct the sentence.

× Shoes can use by many long time.

✓ Shoes can be used for a long time.

The sentence uses incorrect passive voice. 'Can use by' is incorrect; the correct passive form is 'can be used'. Also, 'many long time' is incorrect; it should be 'for a long time' to express duration.

× Yes I have. I bought the Adidas shoes very good design but I that shoes is very big for me so I want to change it but it is it can't be.

✓ Yes, I have. I bought Adidas shoes with a very good design, but those shoes are very big for me, so I want to change them, but I can't.

The sentence has multiple issues: missing prepositions ('with a very good design'), incorrect pronouns ('that shoes' should be 'those shoes'), subject-verb agreement ('shoes is' should be 'shoes are'), and awkward phrasing ('it is it can't be' corrected to 'I can't'). Also, 'change it' should be 'change them' because 'shoes' is plural.

× I usually bought a very expensive shoes because expensive shoes can use for a long time.

✓ I usually buy very expensive shoes because expensive shoes can be used for a long time.

The verb 'usually bought' is incorrect because 'usually' indicates habitual action, which requires present tense 'buy'. Also, 'a very expensive shoes' is incorrect because 'shoes' is plural; remove 'a'. 'Can use' should be 'can be used' to form correct passive voice.

× For example, I bought very cheap shoes, it is suddenly black.

✓ For example, I bought very cheap shoes, and they suddenly turned black.

The phrase 'it is suddenly black' is incorrect because 'shoes' is plural, so 'it' should be 'they'. Also, 'suddenly black' is awkward; 'turned black' is a better expression to indicate change in color.

× I prefer fashionable shoes because it can encourage to learn or do something to go go to the shopping that it and it is college to me.

✓ I prefer fashionable shoes because they can encourage me to learn or do something, like going shopping, and they are important to me.

The pronoun 'it' is incorrectly used for plural 'shoes'; it should be 'they'. The phrase 'encourage to learn or do something to go go to the shopping that it' is unclear and ungrammatical; rephrased for clarity. 'It is college to me' is incorrect; likely intended 'important to me' or similar.