鞋子— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Cevabınızda dilbilgisi hataları ve doğal olmayan ifadeler var. "going for shopping" yerine "going shopping" demelisiniz. Ayrıca, cümleniz fazla uzun ve tekrarlayıcı. Daha doğal ve akıcı olmak için cümlenizi sadeleştirin ve doğrudan soruya yanıt verin.

示例: I don't like buying shoes very much because my feet are quite big, so it's hard to find the right size. Therefore, I usually avoid shopping for shoes often.

建议: Cümlenizde bazı dilbilgisi ve ifade sorunları var. "from online stores" yerine "from online stores" veya "online" demek daha doğru olur. Ayrıca, "not looking comfortable as much as they show" ifadesi doğal değil. Daha açık ve akıcı ifadeler kullanın.

示例: I find it difficult to buy shoes online, especially sneakers, because they might not be as comfortable as they appear in the pictures.

建议: Cümlenizde bazı dilbilgisi hataları ve tekrarlar var. "a good shoes" yerine "good shoes" veya "a good pair of shoes" demelisiniz. Ayrıca, cümlelerinizi daha akıcı ve doğal yapmak için bağlaçlar kullanabilirsiniz.

示例: I can't give an exact amount, but I usually spend more on shoes if they are high quality and from a good brand. For special occasions, I prefer wearing stylish shoes, so I'm willing to pay extra for them.

建议: Cümleniz genel olarak iyi ancak "It's because not only they're making you feel comfortable but also they don't make your feet tired" ifadesi biraz doğal değil. "Not only do they make you feel comfortable, but they also prevent your feet from getting tired" gibi daha doğru ve akıcı ifadeler kullanabilirsiniz.

示例: I prefer comfortable shoes because not only do they make me feel at ease, but they also prevent my feet from getting tired, unlike fashionable shoes.

× I don't like going for shopping.

✓ I don't like going shopping.

The phrase 'going for shopping' is incorrect because 'go' is typically followed directly by the gerund form of the verb without 'for' when indicating an activity. The correct form is 'going shopping'.

× I don't like going for to shop to buy shoes.

✓ I don't like going shopping to buy shoes.

The phrase 'going for to shop' is incorrect. The verb 'go' should be followed by the gerund form without 'for' or 'to'. The correct phrase is 'going shopping'.

× I find it difficult to buy shoes from online stores, especially when it comes to sneakers.

✓ I find it difficult to buy shoes online, especially when it comes to sneakers.

The preposition 'from' is unnecessary when referring to buying online. The correct phrase is 'buy shoes online'.

× you can buy shoes from online store but maybe it's not looking comfortable as much as they show in the picture.

✓ you can buy shoes from an online store but maybe they don't look as comfortable as they show in the picture.

The phrase 'from online store' needs an article 'an' before 'online store'. Also, 'it's not looking comfortable' is incorrect; it should be 'they don't look as comfortable'.

× If I'm going to somewhere fancy, I will prefer wearing a good shoes, good looking shoes.

✓ If I'm going somewhere fancy, I will prefer wearing good shoes, good-looking shoes.

The phrase 'a good shoes' is incorrect because 'shoes' is plural and cannot be preceded by 'a'. Also, 'good looking' should be hyphenated as 'good-looking' when used as an adjective.

× If I'm going to somewhere fancy, I will prefer wearing a good shoes, good looking shoes.

✓ If I'm going somewhere fancy, I will prefer wearing good shoes, good-looking shoes.

The preposition 'to' is unnecessary before 'somewhere'. The correct phrase is 'going somewhere'.

× It's because not only they're making you feel comfortable but also they don't make your feet tired like fashionable shoes.

✓ It's because not only do they make you feel comfortable but also they don't make your feet tired like fashionable shoes.

The sentence structure is incorrect. When using 'not only', the auxiliary verb 'do' is needed for correct subject-verb inversion: 'not only do they make...'.