鞋子— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Cavabınızda qrammatik səhvlər və ifadə qarışıqlığı var. Daha aydın və təbii ifadələrdən istifadə edin, məsələn, müqayisə və səbəb-nəticə əlaqələrini düzgün qurun. Cümlələrinizi daha qısa və məntiqli edin.

示例: Yes, I like buying shoes, but I don't have as many shoes as clothes. I usually prefer buying clothes because I mostly wear white or large shoes. Therefore, when I buy shoes, I only buy white ones.

建议: Cümlələriniz qarışıq və məntiqsizdir. Cavabınızı daha sadə və aydın ifadələrlə verin. "Maybe they can't swim" kimi mənasız ifadələrdən çəkinin. Onlayn alış-verişlə bağlı fikirlərinizi dəqiq və əlaqəli şəkildə ifadə edin.

示例: No, I have never bought shoes online, but I like shopping for clothes online. I haven't tried buying shoes online because I think it can be risky since the shoes might not fit well.

建议: Cavabınızda çoxlu durğunluqlar və təkrarlamalar var. Daha axıcı və qısa cümlələr qurmağa çalışın. Qiymət və keyfiyyət barədə fikirlərinizi daha aydın və dəqiq ifadə edin.

示例: Actually, I don't buy shoes often, but when I do, I prefer to buy expensive, high-quality ones.

建议: Cümlələrinizdə qrammatik səhvlər və natamam fikirlər var. Cavabınızı tam və məntiqli cümlələrlə ifadə edin. Moda və rahatlıq arasındakı üstünlükləri aydın şəkildə izah edin.

示例: I prefer both fashionable and comfortable shoes, but comfort is more important to me. When I buy shoes, I try to find a balance between style and comfort because sometimes certain shoes don't match my jeans.

× I like buying shoes but I don't have a lot of shoes than clothes.

✓ I like buying shoes but I don't have as many shoes as clothes.

The phrase 'a lot of shoes than clothes' is incorrect because 'a lot of' is not used with 'than' for comparison. Instead, 'as many... as' should be used to compare countable nouns like 'shoes' and 'clothes'.

× I prefer buying clothes than them because I just wearing white shoes and maybe big shoes.

✓ I prefer buying clothes to them because I just wear white shoes and maybe big shoes.

The correct preposition after 'prefer' when comparing two things is 'to', not 'than'. Also, 'just wearing' is incorrect here; it should be 'just wear' to match the present simple tense for habitual actions.

× I just wearing white shoes and maybe big shoes.

✓ I just wear white shoes and maybe big shoes.

The verb 'wearing' is incorrectly used here without an auxiliary verb. Since the sentence describes a habitual action, the simple present tense 'wear' is appropriate.

× No I haven't ever bought shoes online but I like doing shopping online for clothes but I don't I didn't try buying clothes.

✓ No, I haven't ever bought shoes online but I like shopping online for clothes, although I haven't tried buying clothes online yet.

The sentence mixes present and past tense incorrectly. 'I don't I didn't try' is incorrect; it should be 'I haven't tried' to indicate experience up to now. Also, 'doing shopping' is unnatural; 'shopping' alone is sufficient.

× I think that buy buying online shoes can be a little bit dangerous for us.

✓ I think that buying shoes online can be a little bit dangerous for us.

The phrase 'buy buying' is redundant and incorrect. The correct gerund form 'buying' should be used alone after 'think that'.

× Maybe they can't swim.

✓ Maybe they don't fit well.

The pronoun 'they' is unclear and 'can't swim' is irrelevant in the context of buying shoes online. The intended meaning is likely that shoes may not fit well when bought online.

× Actually, when I buy shoes, I uh, prefer uh, cool quality shoes because I don't umm, often buy shoes and when I when I want to buy it, I buy expensive and the high quality shoes.

✓ Actually, when I buy shoes, I prefer good quality shoes because I don't often buy shoes, and when I want to buy them, I buy expensive and high-quality shoes.

'Cool quality' is informal and unclear; 'good quality' is better. 'Buy it' is incorrect because 'shoes' is plural; 'buy them' is correct. Also, 'the high quality shoes' should be 'high-quality shoes' without 'the'.

× But I but when I buy shoes I choose for both of them because sometimes when I wear the jeans they doesn't.

✓ But when I buy shoes, I choose both of them because sometimes when I wear jeans, they don't.

'The jeans' is incorrect; 'jeans' is a plural noun used without 'the' unless specifying particular jeans. Also, 'they doesn't' is incorrect subject-verb agreement; it should be 'they don't'.