鞋子— Part 1 评分报告

建议: In English (Malaysia), try to use correct verb forms and avoid redundancy. For example, say "It actually depends on the situation" and avoid repeating "really" unnecessarily. Also, keep your answer concise and clear.

示例: It actually depends on the situation. I usually buy shoes when I really need them, or when I see a pair I've wanted for a long time, especially if they are on sale.

建议: In English (Malaysia), pay attention to verb forms and sentence structure. For example, say "I haven't tried buying shoes online" and use linking words like "because" properly. Also, avoid repeating words and be specific.

示例: No, I haven't tried buying shoes online because I value the experience of shopping in physical stores and getting assistance from the staff. Also, I want to avoid receiving defective shoes or ones that don't fit or feel comfortable.

建议: In English (Malaysia), use consistent verb tenses and correct plural forms. For example, say "I spend a moderate amount" and "shoes that are on sale". Also, try to link your ideas smoothly.

示例: I usually spend a moderate amount of money because I buy shoes that are on sale, and I'm not the kind of person who keeps buying shoes frequently.

建议: In English (Malaysia), remember to use correct verb agreement, such as "It depends". Also, use linking words like "for example" and "on the other hand" effectively to make your answer coherent.

示例: It depends on the situation. For example, when I go to school or in daily life, I wear comfortable shoes like Crocs. On the other hand, during special occasions like wedding ceremonies, I prefer fashionable shoes.

× It actually depend on situation.

✓ It actually depends on the situation.

The verb 'depend' should be in the third person singular form 'depends' to agree with the singular subject 'It'. Also, the noun 'situation' requires the definite article 'the' because it refers to a specific context.

× I usually buy one when I really need it or when I saw one that I really wanted it for a long time and also when the shoe is in sales.

✓ I usually buy one when I really need it or when I see one that I have really wanted for a long time and also when the shoe is on sale.

The verb 'saw' is past tense but the sentence context is habitual, so 'see' in present tense is appropriate. The phrase 'wanted it for a long time' should be 'have really wanted' to indicate a continuing desire. Also, 'in sales' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'on sale'.

× No, I haven't try buying shoes online because I value the experience of shopping in physical store and get assistance from the worker there.

✓ No, I haven't tried buying shoes online because I value the experience of shopping in a physical store and getting assistance from the workers there.

After 'haven't', the verb should be in past participle form 'tried'. Also, 'physical store' needs the article 'a'. The phrase 'get assistance' should be 'getting assistance' to maintain parallel structure.

× Also I want to prevent from getting a defective shoes or shoes, they are not suit me and not comfortable.

✓ Also, I want to prevent getting defective shoes that do not suit me and are not comfortable.

The phrase 'a defective shoes' is incorrect because 'shoes' is plural and cannot be preceded by 'a'. The phrase 'prevent from getting' should be 'prevent getting'. 'They are not suit me' should be 'that do not suit me' to correctly use the verb and relative clause.

× I spent a moderate amount of money because usually I will buy shoes that are on sales and I'm not the kind of person who will keep buying shoes.

✓ I spend a moderate amount of money because usually I buy shoes that are on sale and I'm not the kind of person who keeps buying shoes.

The question is about usual spending, so present tense 'spend' is appropriate instead of past tense 'spent'. 'On sales' should be 'on sale'. 'Who will keep buying' should be 'who keeps buying' to agree with the singular subject.

× It depend on the situation.

✓ It depends on the situation.

The verb 'depend' should be in third person singular form 'depends' to agree with the singular subject 'It'.