鞋子— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains redundancy. Try to give a direct response with clear frequency and avoid repeating similar ideas. Also, correct minor grammar mistakes and be more specific about how often you buy shoes.

示例: Yes, I enjoy buying shoes because I wear them daily. I usually buy new shoes once or twice a year, depending on my needs.

建议: Your answer provides relevant details but lacks coherence and has some grammatical errors. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and avoid repetition. Also, be more precise with your description and price information.

示例: Yes, last month I saw an ad for Nike shoes on Flipkart, and I really liked the red inner colour. Since they were reasonably priced at around ₹500, I decided to buy them.

建议: Your answer is clear but can be improved by structuring it better and using more precise vocabulary. Avoid filler phrases like 'to be honest' and clarify your points with linking words.

示例: The amount I spend on shoes depends on the brand and quality. On average, I usually spend between ₹500 and ₹1000.

建议: Your answer addresses the question but contains some hesitation and informal language. Try to use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid filler words. Also, use more formal vocabulary and correct grammar.

示例: I like both fashionable and comfortable shoes. For special occasions, I prefer fashionable shoes because they look nice; however, for daily wear, I choose comfortable shoes to ensure I feel good while walking.

× Yes, I love buying shoes because it's a a daily wear and I often buy it once in a while or once in a year.

✓ Yes, I love buying shoes because they are daily wear and I often buy them once in a while or once a year.

The phrase 'it's a a daily wear' incorrectly uses singular 'it' and article 'a' with the plural concept 'daily wear'. Also, 'buy it' refers to shoes, which is plural, so 'them' should be used. The correction changes 'it's a a daily wear' to 'they are daily wear' and 'buy it' to 'buy them' to match plural usage.

× Uh, yes, last month I saw ad of Nike shoes on Flipkart and I really like their color.

✓ Uh, yes, last month I saw an ad of Nike shoes on Flipkart and I really liked their color.

The sentence mixes past and present tense incorrectly. 'Saw' is past tense, so 'like' should be 'liked' to maintain past tense consistency. Also, 'ad' needs the article 'an' before it.

× It's red inner colour.

✓ It has a red inner colour.

The phrase 'It's red inner colour' is incorrect because 'inner colour' needs a possessive or descriptive structure. Adding 'has a' clarifies that the shoes possess a red inner colour.

× So that time I bought it and it's like a ₹500, so it's not too much expensive so I bought it that time.

✓ So that time I bought them and they cost about ₹500, so they weren't too expensive, so I bought them then.

'It' is used for singular, but 'shoes' are plural, so 'them' is correct. Also, 'it's like a ₹500' is awkward; 'they cost about ₹500' is clearer. 'Not too much expensive' should be 'not too expensive' or 'weren't too expensive' for past tense.

× To be honest it depends on the shoes brand and their stuff but if I talk about a average mostly I spend like between 500 to 1000 on shoes.

✓ To be honest, it depends on the shoe brand and their stuff, but if I talk about an average, mostly I spend between 500 to 1000 on shoes.

'Shoes brand' should be 'shoe brand' as 'shoe' acts as an adjective here. 'A average' should be 'an average' because 'average' starts with a vowel sound. 'Like between' is redundant; 'between' alone suffices.

× I love both and on occasions I prefer to wear fashionable shoes because it looks so nice, but on the daily wears I've, uh, wear comfortable ones because I wanna feel comfortable when I'm walking.

✓ I love both and on occasions I prefer to wear fashionable shoes because they look so nice, but on daily wear I wear comfortable ones because I want to feel comfortable when I'm walking.

'It looks' refers to 'shoes' which is plural, so 'they look' is correct. 'Daily wears' is incorrect; 'daily wear' is uncountable and does not take plural form. 'I've, uh, wear' is incorrect; 'I wear' is correct. 'Wanna' is informal; 'want to' is preferred in formal speech.