鞋子— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is good but try to avoid grammatical errors and redundancy. For example, use 'types of shoes' instead of 'those of a kind' and avoid repeating similar ideas. Also, keep your sentences concise and clear.

示例: I enjoy buying shoes, especially durable and affordable ones suitable for trekking and traveling. Since I often go hiking, my shoes wear out quickly, so I need to buy new ones quite often.

建议: Your answer is unclear and contains many hesitations and grammatical mistakes. Try to express your ideas clearly and logically, using linking words. For example, explain why you hesitate to buy shoes online and mention specific concerns.

示例: I have never bought shoes online because I find it difficult to inspect them physically. Moreover, I worry about the quality and the refund policy, which makes me hesitant to trust online purchases.

建议: Your answer is relevant but contains some grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid repeating the same point. Also, be careful with singular and plural forms.

示例: I usually spend a moderate amount on one good pair of shoes that I can use for a long time. I believe it's wiser to invest in durable shoes rather than buying many cheap pairs.

建议: Your answer has many pronunciation and grammatical errors and is incomplete. Try to speak clearly and complete your sentences. Also, explain your preference with reasons and use linking words for coherence.

示例: I definitely prefer comfortable shoes because comfort is my top priority. Since I wear shoes daily for work, uncomfortable shoes would cause problems. Therefore, I choose comfort over fashion.

× I love buying shoes, especially those of a kind which is very helpful in trekking and travelling.

✓ I love buying shoes, especially those kinds which are very helpful in trekking and travelling.

The phrase 'those of a kind which is' incorrectly mixes singular and plural forms. 'Those' is plural, so it should be followed by 'kinds' (plural) and 'are' instead of 'is' to maintain agreement.

× my shoes often gets damaged quickly so I have to buy it quite often.

✓ my shoes often get damaged quickly so I have to buy them quite often.

The subject 'shoes' is plural, so the verb should be 'get' instead of 'gets'. Also, the pronoun referring to 'shoes' should be 'them' (plural) instead of 'it' (singular).

× But I love those kind of shoes which are durable and affordable.

✓ But I love those kinds of shoes which are durable and affordable.

The phrase 'those kind' is incorrect because 'those' is plural and should be followed by 'kinds' (plural).

× Since I often like going into hiking and traveling, my shoes often gets damaged quickly so I have to buy it quite often.

✓ Since I often like going hiking and traveling, my shoes often get damaged quickly so I have to buy them quite often.

The preposition 'into' is incorrect here; the correct expression is 'going hiking'. Also, corrected verb and pronoun agreement as explained earlier.

× my shoes often gets damaged quickly so I have to buy it quite often.

✓ my shoes often get damaged quickly so I have to buy them quite often.

The verb 'gets' should be 'get' to agree with plural subject 'shoes'. The pronoun 'it' should be 'them' to refer to plural 'shoes'.

× Not really, I have not because I think buying shoes online helps me.

✓ Not really, I have not because I think buying shoes online does not help me.

The original sentence is unclear and incomplete. Adding 'does not help me' clarifies the meaning and corrects the sentence structure.

× And since there is a less of a physical thoughts, I have a doubt and lack of a trust buying shoes online.

✓ And since there is less physical inspection, I have doubts and lack trust in buying shoes online.

'A less of a physical thoughts' is incorrect. 'Less' is used without 'a' and 'thoughts' is not appropriate here; 'physical inspection' fits better. Also, 'a doubt' and 'lack of a trust' should be plural or uncountable forms: 'doubts' and 'lack trust'.

× Maybe it might get damaged and sometimes the refund policy is not all.

✓ Maybe it might get damaged and sometimes the refund policy is not good.

The phrase 'refund policy is not all' is unclear and incorrect. Replacing with 'refund policy is not good' clarifies the meaning.

× So I think rather than just buying multiple shoes of smaller cost or with a lower prices, it is very wise to buy something that will be durable for the long time.

✓ So I think rather than just buying multiple pairs of shoes at a lower cost or with lower prices, it is very wise to buy something that will be durable for a long time.

'Multiple shoes' should be 'multiple pairs of shoes' because shoes come in pairs. 'Smaller cost' should be 'lower cost' and 'a lower prices' should be 'lower prices' to match plural form.

× So I usually buy one and just use them.

✓ So I usually buy one and just use it.

'One' refers to a single pair of shoes, which is singular, so the pronoun should be 'it' instead of 'them'.

× Ionell definitely go for comfortable suits because comfort comfortness is my first utmost priority because shoes are something that you use to work and I just work on the daily basis.

✓ I will definitely go for comfortable shoes because comfort is my utmost priority since shoes are something that you use for work and I work on a daily basis.

'Ionell' is a typo for 'I will'. 'Suits' should be 'shoes'. 'Comfort comfortness' is redundant; 'comfort' suffices. 'You use to work' should be 'you use for work'. 'I just work on the daily basis' should be 'I work on a daily basis'.

× So not using the comfortable shoes will be very much problematic for me.

✓ So not using comfortable shoes will be very problematic for me.

'The comfortable shoes' is incorrect here; general statement about comfortable shoes does not require 'the'. Also, 'very much problematic' is awkward; 'very problematic' is better.

× So rather than just going for fashionable shoes, it is wise for me to go for the.

✓ So rather than just going for fashionable shoes, it is wise for me to go for comfortable ones.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'go for the.' It should be completed with 'comfortable ones' to make sense.