鞋子— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答は質問に直接答えていますが、文法の誤りや不自然な表現が多く、意味が伝わりにくい部分があります。例えば、「I buy shoes when I broke my shoes」は時制の誤りで、「I don't you」は意味不明です。より自然で正確な英語表現を使い、文を簡潔にまとめることが必要です。

示例: No, I don't like buying shoes very much. I usually buy new shoes only once a year, mostly when my old ones are worn out.

建议: 回答に文法ミスがあり、意味が不明瞭な部分があります。例えば、「both shoes online at once」は誤りで、「was so different with the picture」も不自然です。より正確な表現を使い、理由を明確に述べることで、回答の質を上げられます。

示例: Yes, I have bought shoes online once, but they looked very different from the pictures, so I decided not to buy shoes online anymore.

建议: 回答が断片的で文法的に不完全です。「I can't. I can't pay more money to shoes」は不自然で意味が伝わりにくいです。金額の説明と理由を一文でまとめ、自然な表現を心がけましょう。

示例: I usually spend about 10,000 yen on shoes because I don't like buying shoes very much, so I prefer to keep the cost low.

建议: 比較表現に誤りがあります（"prefer fashionable shoes than"は不自然）。また、「fashionable side options」という表現も不明瞭です。正しい比較表現を使い、理由を明確に述べると良いでしょう。

示例: I prefer fashionable shoes to comfortable ones because I think shoes are an important part of fashion and style.

× I buy shoes when I broke my shoes.

✓ I buy shoes when I break my shoes.

The sentence mixes present tense 'buy' with past tense 'broke'. To maintain consistency, both verbs should be in present tense since the action is habitual. Use 'break' instead of 'broke'.

× So I don't you.

✓ So I don't.

The phrase 'I don't you' is incorrect because 'you' is unnecessary and grammatically incorrect here. The correct expression is 'I don't' to indicate negation of the previous action.

× Yes, I have both shoes online at once but the shoes was so different with the picture on the Internet so I won't buy shoes on the Internet.

✓ Yes, I have bought shoes online once but the shoes were so different from the picture on the Internet that I won't buy shoes online again.

The verb 'have both' is incorrect; it should be 'have bought' (present perfect). 'Was' should be 'were' to agree with plural 'shoes'. 'Different with' should be 'different from'. Also, 'at once' is better as 'once' to indicate a single occasion. The sentence is restructured for clarity.

× the shoes was so different with the picture on the Internet

✓ the shoes were so different from the picture on the Internet

The correct preposition to express difference is 'different from', not 'different with'. Also, 'shoes' is plural, so the verb should be 'were'.

× I usually use ¥10,000 for buying shoes.

✓ I usually spend ¥10,000 on buying shoes.

The verb 'use' is not appropriate for money in this context; 'spend' is correct. The preposition 'for' should be 'on' when referring to spending money on something.

× I can't pay more money to shoes because I don't like shoes so much.

✓ I can't pay more money for shoes because I don't like shoes that much.

The preposition 'to' is incorrect here; 'for' is used when referring to paying money for something. Also, 'so much' is better expressed as 'that much' in this context.

× So that is the maximum cost I.

✓ So that is the maximum cost I can pay.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks a verb. Adding 'can pay' completes the sentence and clarifies the meaning.

× I prefer fashionable shoes than comfortable shoes.

✓ I prefer fashionable shoes to comfortable shoes.

The verb 'prefer' is followed by 'to' when comparing two things, not 'than'. Using 'than' is incorrect here.

× Shoes are one of the most important thing for fashion,

✓ Shoes are one of the most important things for fashion,

The phrase 'one of the most important thing' is incorrect because 'thing' should be plural 'things' after 'one of the'.

× so I think it is better to think about fashionable side options.

✓ so I think it is better to consider fashionable options.

The phrase 'think about fashionable side options' is awkward and unclear. 'Consider fashionable options' is clearer and more natural. Also, 'side' is unnecessary here.