鞋子— Part 1 评分报告

建议: حاول أن تكون إجابتك أكثر وضوحًا وتنظيمًا، وابتعد عن التكرار واستخدم جمل كاملة وواضحة. كما يُفضل أن تذكر عدد المرات التي تشتري فيها الأحذية بشكل محدد وتشرح السبب بشكل أكثر تفصيلاً.

示例: Yes, I like buying shoes, especially at the beginning of the year. I usually buy formal shoes in different colors like pink, black, and white because I find them useful for various occasions.

建议: حاول أن تكون إجابتك أكثر دقة وتنظيمًا، واستخدم كلمات مناسبة لوصف تجربتك. كما يجب أن توضح متى وكيف كانت تجربتك مع شراء الأحذية عبر الإنترنت بشكل كامل وواضح.

示例: Yes, I ordered shoes online from Xi'an last week, but unfortunately, they were too small for my feet, so I was disappointed with the purchase.

建议: حاول أن تعبر عن فكرتك بشكل أكثر وضوحًا وتنظيمًا، واستخدم جمل كاملة مع ربط الأفكار باستخدام كلمات ربط مناسبة. كما يُفضل أن تذكر مبلغًا تقريبيًا أو نطاقًا للسعر.

示例: I usually don't spend a lot of money on shoes because I believe that if the shoes are of high quality, they can last a long time, so I prefer to buy durable ones.

建议: حاول أن تكون إجابتك أكثر وضوحًا وتنظيمًا، واستخدم جمل كاملة مع ربط الأفكار بشكل منطقي. كما يُفضل أن تشرح أسباب تفضيلك لكل نوع من الأحذية بشكل مفصل.

示例: I prefer comfortable shoes because I can wear them for a long time without feeling tired. However, I choose fashionable shoes for special occasions when I want to look good.

× Actually at the first of the year I like to change my shoes and buy formal shoes like with a color pink, black, white, etcetera because I felt that is useful and.

✓ Actually, at the beginning of the year, I like to change my shoes and buy formal shoes in colors like pink, black, white, etc., because I feel that it is useful.

The phrase 'at the first of the year' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'at the beginning of the year'. Also, 'like with a color pink' is incorrect; it should be 'in colors like pink'. Additionally, 'felt' should be 'feel' to match the present tense context.

× Yes, I order shoes from Xi'an and about last week and it was very small of you of my feet. So I felt that is not.

✓ Yes, I ordered shoes from Xi'an about last week, and they were very small for my feet. So I felt that they were not suitable.

The verb 'order' should be in past tense 'ordered' to match the time reference 'last week'. 'It was very small of you of my feet' is incorrect; it should be 'they were very small for my feet'. Also, 'felt that is not' is incomplete and should be 'felt that they were not suitable'.

× Not that much because it's not necessary to change our choose because we can wear it in a long long long time if it is with high quality.

✓ Not that much because it's not necessary to change our shoes often since we can wear them for a long, long time if they are of high quality.

The word 'choose' is incorrect; it should be 'shoes'. Also, 'wear it' should be 'wear them' to agree with the plural noun 'shoes'. The sentence structure is improved for clarity.

× I prefer comfortable shoes because we can wear it in a long line with a long time without feeling tired and when I go to the work week I can't wear it. But the fashionable choose. I prefer it when I have occasion and I want to be in a good.

✓ I prefer comfortable shoes because we can wear them for a long time without feeling tired. When I go to work during the week, I can't wear fashionable shoes. I prefer them when I have an occasion and want to look good.

The pronoun 'it' is incorrectly used for plural 'shoes'; it should be 'them'. 'In a long line with a long time' is incorrect; it should be 'for a long time'. 'Choose' should be 'shoes'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and correctness.