鞋子— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“even few months”应为“every few months”，“something specials”应为“something special”。建议注意时态和单复数的正确使用，同时避免冗余表达。

示例: Yes, I enjoy buying shoes because they help me express my personal style. I usually buy new shoes every few months, especially during sales or when I need something special for work or casual wear. For example, I often look for comfortable running shoes to wear during work.

建议: 回答中语法和表达不清晰，如“obviously that the sizes which showing in the online is very different that you try in your shoes in the reality shop”表达混乱。建议简化句子结构，使用正确的时态和词汇，使表达更自然流畅。

示例: Yes, I have bought running shoes online, but I won't do it again because the sizes shown online are often different from the ones I try in physical stores.

建议: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不完整，如“didn't very care”应为“don't care”，“when I wearing it wearing”表达重复且错误。建议注意时态一致性和句子完整性，避免重复。

示例: I usually spend around 300 to 400 yuan on shoes. I don't care much about the brand; comfort is the most important factor for me when wearing shoes.

建议: 回答表达不清晰且有语法错误，如“comfortable shoes is”应为“comfortable shoes are”，句子结构混乱且有重复。建议简化表达，使用正确的语法和连贯的句子。

示例: As I mentioned before, I prefer comfortable shoes over fashionable ones. If shoes are only fashionable but not comfortable, they are not useful to me in daily life.

× I usually buy new shoes even few months, especially when there is a sales or when I need something specials for my work or casual wearing.

✓ I usually buy new shoes every few months, especially when there is a sale or when I need something special for my work or casual wear.

这里“few months”前缺少限定词“every”，表示频率；“a sales”中“sales”应为单数“sale”；“something specials”中“specials”应为形容词“special”修饰“something”；“casual wearing”应为名词短语“casual wear”。这些都是单复数和词性使用错误。

× For example, I recurrently pursue a pair of running suits to stay comfortable during my work.

✓ For example, I regularly buy a pair of running shoes to stay comfortable during my work.

“running suits”应为“running shoes”，因为买鞋子；“recurrently pursue”用词不当，改为“regularly buy”更合适。这里涉及单复数和词汇选择错误。

× I promise that I won't buy any shoes online again because I obviously that the sizes which showing in the online is very different that you try in your shoes in the reality shop.

✓ I promise that I won't buy any shoes online again because I obviously think that the sizes shown online are very different from when you try shoes in a real shop.

“obviously that”缺少动词，应为“obviously think that”；“which showing”应为过去分词“shown”；“in the online”应为“online”；“is very different that you try in your shoes in the reality shop”结构混乱，应改为“are very different from when you try shoes in a real shop”。涉及情态动词和动词形式错误。

× I obviously that the sizes which showing in the online is very different that you try in your shoes in the reality shop.

✓ I obviously think that the sizes shown online are very different from when you try shoes in a real shop.

“in the online”应为“online”，“different that”应为“different from”，“try in your shoes”应为“try shoes”。介词使用错误。

× I bought my running shoes online, but I promise that I won't buy any shoes online again because I obviously that the sizes which showing in the online is very different that you try in your shoes in the reality shop.

✓ I bought my running shoes online, but I promise that I won't buy any shoes online again because I obviously think that the sizes shown online are very different from when you try shoes in a real shop.

“showing”应为过去分词“shown”，与过去时态搭配。

× I didn't very care about the brand.

✓ I don't care much about the brand.

“didn't very care”时态和副词位置错误，应使用一般现在时“don't care”，副词“much”放在动词后。

× I didn't very care about the brand.

✓ I don't care much about the brand.

“very care”搭配不当，应使用“care much”表示程度。

× I think that the most important part for my shoes is whether it is very comfortable when I wearing it wearing.

✓ I think that the most important part of my shoes is whether they are very comfortable when I wear them.

“when I wearing it wearing”时态和重复错误，应为“when I wear them”；“it”应指复数“shoes”，用“they”；“part for”应为“part of”。

× I think that the most important part for my shoes is whether it is very comfortable when I wearing it wearing.

✓ I think that the most important part of my shoes is whether they are very comfortable when I wear them.

“shoes”是复数，代词应为“they”和“them”，保持一致。

× Just like what I talking about, for me, I think comfortable shoes is more important than the fashionable shoes.

✓ Just like what I am talking about, for me, I think comfortable shoes are more important than fashionable shoes.

“I talking”缺少助动词，应为“I am talking”；“comfortable shoes is”主谓不一致，应为“comfortable shoes are”；“the fashionable shoes”前冠词多余。

× Just like what I talking about, for me, I think comfortable shoes is more important than the fashionable shoes.

✓ Just like what I am talking about, for me, I think comfortable shoes are more important than fashionable shoes.

“the fashionable shoes”中“the”不必要，泛指时不加定冠词。

× Because for me, I think if the shoes is just fashionable, however it's not very useful for me.

✓ Because for me, I think if the shoes are just fashionable, they are not very useful for me.

“shoes”复数，谓语动词应用复数“are”；“it's”指代不明确，应改为“they are”。

× Because for me, I think if the shoes is just fashionable, however it's not very useful for me.

✓ Because for me, I think if the shoes are just fashionable, they are not very useful for me.

“however”用法不当，句中不需要转折词，去掉“however”更通顺。

× I won't umm, I may not very. I will not worry. It's very day by day.

✓ I won't... umm, I may not be very sure. I will not worry. It's very day by day.

句子结构混乱，“I may not very”缺少谓语，“It's very day by day”表达不清，应改为更明确的表达。