鞋子— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Try to give a more complete and natural answer by combining your ideas into one clear sentence and adding some details. For example, explain why you need new shoes and how often you buy them. Avoid repeating the same phrase.

示例: Yes, I like buying shoes because I often need new ones for different occasions, and I usually buy them a few times a year to keep my collection updated.

建议: Your answer is very short and does not provide any details. Try to expand your answer by explaining your experience with buying shoes online, such as how often you do it or why you prefer it.

示例: Yes, I have bought shoes online several times because it is convenient and I can find more variety than in stores.

建议: Your answer has good content but needs clearer structure and grammar. Use linking words to connect your ideas and correct sentence structure. Also, avoid repeating words unnecessarily.

示例: I usually spend around $100 on shoes because I want to buy good quality ones that will last a long time, so I don't have to buy new shoes every year.

建议: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. Make sure to answer directly and explain your preference clearly with reasons. Use correct grammar and avoid unfinished sentences.

示例: I prefer comfortable shoes because I want to feel relaxed when I wear them, even if they are not very fashionable.

× I like buying shoes because I need the new ones.

✓ I like buying shoes because I need new ones.

The use of 'the new ones' is incorrect here because it implies specific shoes already known, but the student means any new shoes in general. Removing 'the' corrects the plural noun usage in this context.

× I usually spend around $100 to buy a new shoes 'cause I wanna buy a quality, a good quality to send a long time with me and I don't have to buy new shoes like one years.

✓ I usually spend around $100 to buy new shoes because I want to buy good quality shoes that last a long time with me and I don't have to buy new shoes every year.

The phrase 'a new shoes' is incorrect because 'shoes' is plural and should not have the singular article 'a'. Also, 'a quality, a good quality' is redundant and awkward; 'good quality shoes' is clearer. 'To send a long time with me' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'that last a long time with me'. 'Like one years' is incorrect; it should be 'every year' to express frequency.

× No, I do prefer comfortable shoes 'cause I wanna to be comfortable when I wear it and I don't have to be.

✓ No, I do prefer comfortable shoes because I want to be comfortable when I wear them and I don't have to be uncomfortable.

The phrase 'wanna to be' is incorrect; 'want to be' is correct. Also, 'when I wear it' is incorrect because 'shoes' is plural, so 'them' should be used. The sentence 'I don't have to be' is incomplete; it should specify 'uncomfortable' to complete the meaning.