鞋子— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is good but try to avoid small grammatical errors like 'visit to the market'. Also, try to use linking words to make your answer more coherent, for example, use 'because' or 'so' properly. Try to be more specific about how often you buy shoes, like 'once a month' or 'every few weeks'.

示例: Yes, I love buying shoes because they help me complete my outfits. I usually visit the market once a month to find shoes that perfectly match my style and are comfortable to wear.

建议: Your answer has good content but there are some grammar mistakes like 'save my time' should be 'saves my time'. Also, avoid sentence fragments like 'Before making a purchase.' Try to connect your ideas smoothly using linking words such as 'so' or 'therefore'.

示例: Yes, I often buy shoes online because it is very convenient and saves my time. Therefore, before making a purchase, I always check the shop details and read customer reviews to ensure they offer standard sizes.

建议: Your answer is understandable but has repetition ('flat flat shoes') and lacks linking words. Try to use linking words like 'if' and 'otherwise' properly and avoid repeating words. Also, try to be more specific about the types of shoes and why the prices differ.

示例: It depends; if I buy sneakers, my budget is around $35 to $40, but if I buy flat shoes, the price is usually below $5.

建议: Your answer is clear but a bit repetitive with the word 'comfortable'. Try to use synonyms and linking words like 'since' or 'because' to make your answer more natural. Also, try to add a concluding sentence to strengthen your opinion.

示例: I always prefer comfortable shoes over fashionable ones since uncomfortable shoes make it difficult to walk and affect my mood. Therefore, comfort is my top priority when choosing shoes.

× I often visit to the market to find shoes that are perfectly matched with my style and are comfortable to wear.

✓ I often visit the market to find shoes that are perfectly matched with my style and are comfortable to wear.

The preposition 'to' is unnecessary after the verb 'visit'. In English, we say 'visit the market' not 'visit to the market'. So, remove 'to' to correct the sentence.

× Yes, I often buy shoes online because it is very convenient and save my time.

✓ Yes, I often buy shoes online because it is very convenient and saves my time.

The verb 'save' should agree with the singular subject 'it' (referring to buying shoes online). Therefore, 'save' should be 'saves' to match third person singular present tense.

× Before making a purchase. I always check the shop details and read the customer review to ensure they offer a standard sizes.

✓ Before making a purchase, I always check the shop details and read the customer reviews to ensure they offer standard sizes.

The original sentence incorrectly uses a period instead of a comma, causing a sentence fragment. Also, 'customer review' should be plural 'customer reviews' to match the context, and 'a standard sizes' is incorrect; 'standard sizes' without 'a' is correct.

× Before making a purchase. I always check the shop details and read the customer review to ensure they offer a standard sizes.

✓ Before making a purchase, I always check the shop details and read the customer reviews to ensure they offer standard sizes.

The article 'a' is incorrectly used before the plural noun 'sizes'. Articles like 'a' are used with singular countable nouns, so it should be removed here.

× Before making a purchase. I always check the shop details and read the customer review to ensure they offer a standard sizes.

✓ Before making a purchase, I always check the shop details and read the customer reviews to ensure they offer standard sizes.

The phrase 'customer review' should be plural 'customer reviews' because it refers to multiple reviews, and 'sizes' is plural, so the article 'a' should be removed.

× It depends, if I buy the sneakers then my budget is around $35 to $40 and if I just buy flat flat shoes then it is below $5.

✓ It depends. If I buy sneakers, then my budget is around $35 to $40, and if I just buy flat shoes, then it is below $5.

The word 'sneakers' is plural and does not need 'the' before it. Also, 'flat flat shoes' is repetitive; one 'flat' is enough. Commas and periods are added for clarity.

× It depends, if I buy the sneakers then my budget is around $35 to $40 and if I just buy flat flat shoes then it is below $5.

✓ It depends. If I buy sneakers, then my budget is around $35 to $40, and if I just buy flat shoes, then it is below $5.

The original sentence is a run-on sentence. It should be split into clearer parts with proper punctuation and conjunctions for better readability.

× I always prefer comfortable shoes rather than fashionable shoes because if I'm not comfortable wearing the shoes then it is very difficult to walk and I do not feel good when it is not comfortable.

✓ I always prefer comfortable shoes rather than fashionable shoes because if I'm not comfortable wearing the shoes, then it is very difficult to walk and I do not feel good when they are not comfortable.

The sentence needs commas to separate clauses for clarity. Also, 'it is not comfortable' should be 'they are not comfortable' to correctly refer to 'shoes' (plural).

× I always prefer comfortable shoes rather than fashionable shoes because if I'm not comfortable wearing the shoes then it is very difficult to walk and I do not feel good when it is not comfortable.

✓ I always prefer comfortable shoes rather than fashionable shoes because if I'm not comfortable wearing the shoes, then it is very difficult to walk and I do not feel good when they are not comfortable.

The pronoun 'it' incorrectly refers to 'shoes' which is plural. The correct pronoun is 'they' to match the plural noun 'shoes'.