鞋子— Part 1 评分报告
对话
Part 1
考官
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
考生
Yes, I really like buying new shoes because I really like the news version shoes in new style. But I'm not buying shoes very often because I'm going to buy the shoes. I will buy the attendee shoes and I will use this one years or two years.
考官
Have you ever bought shoes online?
考生
I buy shoes all online because I don't have time to go to the market and choose any shoes in this because I think in the last time it's got so many friends I can choose so I can buy it easier with the more beautiful shoes.
考官
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
考生
When I buy shoes, I usually spend about 1 or 2 million Vietnam Dong because when I will use this shoes very long times, so I will buy the constable and durable shoes.
考官
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
考生
Happy birthday for shoes then professional fashionable shoes because I'm not bad. I just use shoes for walking, for going to work, going to study, not go to the fashion stand so I feel comfortable shoes.
评估
总分
Part 1
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
分数: 55.0建议: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Bạn nên tránh lặp từ và sử dụng cấu trúc câu đơn giản, tự nhiên hơn. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sau đó giải thích lý do một cách cụ thể và có liên kết logic.
示例: Yes, I like buying new shoes because I enjoy trying different styles. However, I don't buy shoes very often since I usually use a pair for one or two years before replacing them.
Have you ever bought shoes online?
分数: 50.0建议: Bạn nên sử dụng câu trả lời ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Hãy trình bày ý tưởng một cách mạch lạc, sử dụng từ nối để câu trả lời trôi chảy hơn.
示例: Yes, I often buy shoes online because it saves time. Also, there are many options available, so I can easily find beautiful shoes without going to the market.
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
分数: 60.0建议: Bạn cần chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ cho chính xác. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp, sau đó giải thích lý do một cách rõ ràng và có liên kết hợp lý.
示例: I usually spend about 1 to 2 million Vietnam Dong on shoes because I want to buy durable and comfortable ones that I can use for a long time.
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
分数: 45.0建议: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu đơn giản, tránh những từ không phù hợp và giải thích lý do một cách cụ thể.
示例: I prefer comfortable shoes rather than fashionable ones because I mainly use shoes for walking, going to work, and studying, so comfort is more important to me.
语法
× I really like the news version shoes in new style.
✓ I really like the new version shoes in a new style.
The word 'news' is incorrect here; the correct adjective is 'new' to describe the shoes. Also, 'new style' should be preceded by an article 'a' to be grammatically correct.
× But I'm not buying shoes very often because I'm going to buy the shoes.
✓ But I don't buy shoes very often because I plan to buy shoes.
The present continuous 'I'm not buying' is incorrectly used for habitual action; simple present 'I don't buy' is appropriate. Also, 'I'm going to buy the shoes' is vague; 'I plan to buy shoes' is clearer and fits the context.
× I will buy the attendee shoes and I will use this one years or two years.
✓ I will buy the appropriate shoes and use them for one or two years.
'Attendee shoes' is incorrect; likely intended 'appropriate shoes'. Also, 'this one years or two years' is ungrammatical; it should be 'use them for one or two years'.
× I buy shoes all online because I don't have time to go to the market and choose any shoes in this because I think in the last time it's got so many friends I can choose so I can buy it easier with the more beautiful shoes.
✓ I buy shoes all online because I don't have time to go to the market and choose shoes. I think recently there are many options, so I can choose and buy more beautiful shoes more easily.
The sentence has multiple tense and structure issues. 'I buy shoes all online' should be 'I buy shoes online'. 'In this because I think in the last time' is unclear; 'recently' is better. 'It's got so many friends' is incorrect; likely meant 'there are many options'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and correct tense usage.
× When I buy shoes, I usually spend about 1 or 2 million Vietnam Dong because when I will use this shoes very long times, so I will buy the constable and durable shoes.
✓ When I buy shoes, I usually spend about 1 or 2 million Vietnam Dong because I will use these shoes for a long time, so I buy comfortable and durable shoes.
'This shoes' is incorrect; should be 'these shoes' (plural). 'Very long times' is ungrammatical; 'for a long time' is correct. 'Constable' is a wrong word; likely meant 'comfortable'. Also, 'when I will use' is incorrect; simple future or present is better here.
× Happy birthday for shoes then professional fashionable shoes because I'm not bad.
✓ I prefer comfortable shoes rather than professional fashionable shoes because I'm not picky.
The original sentence is unclear and contains irrelevant phrases like 'Happy birthday for shoes'. 'I'm not bad' is vague; 'I'm not picky' fits better. The sentence is corrected for clarity and meaning.
× I just use shoes for walking, for going to work, going to study, not go to the fashion stand so I feel comfortable shoes.
✓ I just use shoes for walking, going to work, and going to study, not for fashion shows, so I prefer comfortable shoes.
The sentence lacks parallel structure and correct conjunctions. 'Not go to the fashion stand' is incorrect; 'not for fashion shows' is better. Added 'and' for proper list conjunction and clarified meaning.
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