鞋子— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is understandable but could be more natural and coherent. Try to start with a clear topic sentence, then explain your problem with shoe size using linking words like 'because' or 'so'. Also, avoid redundancy and grammatical errors such as 'the problem is exist indeed'.

示例: Yes, I enjoy buying shoes, but it is often challenging because my shoe size is 41, which is quite long. As a result, I frequently struggle to find shoes that fit well; some are too tight, while others are too short.

建议: Your answer needs clearer structure and more natural phrasing. Begin with a direct answer, then explain your experience using linking words like 'because' or 'so'. Also, clarify phrases like 'make decision on my perspective' to express your meaning better.

示例: Yes, I have bought shoes online once, but they sent me the wrong size. Because of that bad experience, I now prefer to buy shoes in person to ensure they fit properly.

建议: Your answer is a bit unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to start with a clear topic sentence about your spending habits, then explain your reasons using linking words. Also, avoid confusing phrases like 'no good leather'.

示例: I usually spend a reasonable amount of money on shoes because I believe it's important to buy high-quality footwear. Cheap shoes often use poor materials, so I prefer to invest in durable leather shoes.

建议: Your answer shows good ideas but needs clearer expression and grammar. Use linking words like 'because' properly and avoid awkward phrases like 'ugly view it's also disaster'. Try to express your preference more naturally.

示例: I prefer shoes that are both fashionable and comfortable because if shoes are only stylish, they might not fit well. On the other hand, comfortable shoes that look unattractive are also not ideal for me.

× I like to buy shoes. To be honest, it's a big problem for me because my size is too long. 41 and I never can find suitable size for me.

✓ I like to buy shoes. To be honest, it's a big problem for me because my size is too long, 41, and I can never find a suitable size for me.

The phrase 'never can find suitable size' is incorrect because 'size' is singular and needs an article 'a' before it. Also, 'never can find' is better as 'can never find' for natural word order in English.

× The problem is exist indeed.

✓ The problem does exist indeed.

The sentence 'The problem is exist indeed' is incorrect because 'exist' is a verb and cannot follow 'is' directly. The correct form is 'does exist' to emphasize existence.

× Yes, I bought once and they sent me wrong size.

✓ Yes, I bought once and they sent me the wrong size.

The sentence is mostly correct in tense, but it lacks the definite article 'the' before 'wrong size' which is necessary to specify the particular size sent.

× It was bad experience to be honest and now I always make decision on my perspective.

✓ It was a bad experience, to be honest, and now I always make decisions based on my perspective.

The sentence lacks the article 'a' before 'bad experience'. Also, 'make decision' should be plural 'make decisions' for general meaning. 'On my perspective' is incorrect preposition usage; it should be 'based on my perspective'.

× As the shoes are very important for me to be suitable, I try to spend reasonable money, but not very cheap because it's important to wear high quality shoes and also no good leather.

✓ As shoes are very important for me to be suitable, I try to spend a reasonable amount of money, but not very little because it's important to wear high-quality shoes and also good leather.

The phrase 'spend reasonable money' is unnatural; it should be 'spend a reasonable amount of money'. 'Not very cheap' is better expressed as 'not very little' in this context. 'No good leather' is incorrect; it should be 'good leather'. Also, 'high quality' should be hyphenated as 'high-quality' when used as an adjective.

× I tried to find a mixture of fashionable and comfortable shoes, because if it's only fashionable, of course it it's not suitable for me, but only comfortable and ugly view it's also disaster.

✓ I try to find a mixture of fashionable and comfortable shoes, because if they are only fashionable, of course they are not suitable for me, but if they are only comfortable and ugly in appearance, it's also a disaster.

The original sentence has pronoun errors: 'it' should be 'they' to refer to 'shoes' (plural). Also, 'ugly view' is unnatural; 'ugly in appearance' is better. The verb tenses are adjusted to present to match the question context. Added 'a' before 'disaster' as it is a countable noun here.